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A group of filmmakers decide to make short films about robots, outer space and talking cats.
Ok… but for me to sit 90 minutes watching: First, what prompted the group to do this e.g. “To pass their LA film school final, a group…”. Second, what about adding some obstacles e.g. “…, a group of novice filmmakers must overcome their egos to create short films about robots, outer space, and talkiRead more
Ok… but for me to sit 90 minutes watching:
First, what prompted the group to do this e.g. “To pass their LA film school final, a group…”.
Second, what about adding some obstacles e.g. “…, a group of novice filmmakers must overcome their egos to create short films about robots, outer space, and talking cats…”.
Last, a teaser of some kind e.g. “… outer space, and talking cats, but things get real when one of the students reveals a love affair with their alien cat abductors”
Take care.
P.s. From your similar posts and responses, I hope to God “IvyEight6” is not some social engineered BOT created by Karel to drum up the logline numbers – joking, but… 😉
See lessWhen she discovers that her dreams are depictions of alternate universes, a stressed single mother must venture into another dimension in order to save an alternate version of her child.
Wow! Beautiful idea. Every parent can identify with that kind of guilt-ridden responsibility. When and how does she discover this..? What makes her understand the she is responsible for what goes on in alternate dimensions?
Wow! Beautiful idea. Every parent can identify with that kind of guilt-ridden responsibility.
See lessWhen and how does she discover this..? What makes her understand the she is responsible for what goes on in alternate dimensions?
When a young grocery clerk who doesn’t give a fuck about most things, witnesses a kidnapping of a child, they have to resort to murder in order to save the young boy.
Maybe rephrase "who doesn't give a fuck about mot things" into a shorter sentence. Perhaps: When a young dispassionate clerk witnesses a kidnapping, he has to commit the ultimate crime of passion - murder - in order to save the young child.
Maybe rephrase “who doesn’t give a fuck about mot things” into a shorter sentence. Perhaps: When a young dispassionate clerk witnesses a kidnapping, he has to commit the ultimate crime of passion – murder – in order to save the young child.
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