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  1. Posted: August 28, 2019In: Action

    In a world where people are segregated and opposed depending on their birth month, men born in the month of January every few years are sent to an isolated island to fight to the death to provide live entertainment to millions of worldwide viewers.

    giannisggeorgiou Samurai
    Added an answer on September 7, 2019 at 9:32 pm

    I agree that I find hard to get over how arbitrary the criterion for the segregation is. How do you justify it in your mind? Perhaps there is some meaning, but we don't see it yet. Plus, this world already exists: try getting a date if you are a Gemini in my country. Sorry, couldn't help it.

    I agree that I find hard to get over how arbitrary the criterion for the segregation is. How do you justify it in your mind? Perhaps there is some meaning, but we don’t see it yet.

    Plus, this world already exists: try getting a date if you are a Gemini in my country. Sorry, couldn’t help it.

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  2. Posted: August 26, 2017In: Action

    When two losers, tempted by the promise of money, get mixed up in the love triangle of two witches, they will need all their wits to get out of the mess.

    henb Samurai
    Added an answer on August 31, 2019 at 11:27 pm

    Very cool premise, though it currently reads more like a comedy than action movie, and the final part of your logline: 'they will need all their wits to get out of the mess' seems a too convenient and vague description of how the conflict is resolved. Try changing it to something more specific to thRead more

    Very cool premise, though it currently reads more like a comedy than action movie, and the final part of your logline: ‘they will need all their wits to get out of the mess’ seems a too convenient and vague description of how the conflict is resolved. Try changing it to something more specific to the story.

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  3. Posted: July 8, 2019In: Action

    A grieving student staying alone on a university campus over the Christmas holidays becomes involved in a brutal fight for his life, after accidentally tuning into a nearby heist using a handheld police scanner.

    Bollywoodbabe Penpusher
    Added an answer on August 24, 2019 at 9:27 pm

    Interesting premise

    Interesting premise

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