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When a rookie martial artist’s first covert target is to eliminate innocent children, she refuses to complete the mission and must fight the deadly forces tracking them down and find the truth of their identities.
I don't know all the details; like why the children are targeted or who the lead character works for, so your logline will be different, however as an example how about something like this:--------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------"Read more
I don’t know all the details; like why the children are targeted or who the lead character works for, so your logline will be different, however as an example how about something like this:
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“When she refuses an order to kill the children of her organizations enemies, a Yakuza Assassin must now save the very children she had been ordered to eliminate.”
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Excellent notes by? Richiev.? I particularly like his addition of a piece of information that explains what the two parties are feuding over: gambling.As presented, the logline sets up a situation for a plot but it doesn't follow through with a complete statement of a plot.? A plot is not just aboutRead more
Excellent notes by? Richiev.? I particularly like his addition of a piece of information that explains what the two parties are feuding over: gambling.
As presented, the logline sets up a situation for a plot but it doesn’t follow through with a complete statement of a plot.? A plot is not just about a characters “finding? themselves” in a predicament.? It’s about what they must do about it.? ?Must they hike their way out or fight their way out?
See lessAfter assassinating the German ambassador in wartime Casablanca, an intelligence officer marries his French Resistance partner. But when she is suspected of being a Nazi spy, he must find out her true identity.
What is interesting about this film in terms of loglining is that the second sentence constitutes the MPR (Midpoint Reversal)? that occurs an hour into the film.? The film is essentially the splicing together of two one hour episodes set in two? 2? locations.? The 1st hour is set in Casablanca, theRead more
What is interesting about this film in terms of loglining is that the second sentence constitutes the MPR (Midpoint Reversal)? that occurs an hour into the film.? The film is essentially the splicing together of two one hour episodes set in two? 2? locations.? The 1st hour is set in Casablanca, the 2nd in London.? Everything that happens in the 1st hour is prologue and setup for everything that happens in the 2nd hour.
It’s also worth noting? how the IMDB summary phrases the post-Casablanca episode:? “When they reunite in London, their relationship is tested by the pressures of war.”? Which is hiding the game ball,; it leaves the reader utterly clueless as to the main action of the 2nd half, the dramatic problem the protagonist must solve.? Something a logline should? not do.
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