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Tv Series: After an explosion opens a hole in Hell, allowing demons and unknown creatures to escape, the son of the devil travels to Los Angeles to bring them back before they overrun the world.
mikepedley85 means that his goal -unless stated- would be to let the demons overrun the world "..his reasons are his own.." needs to be spelled out,for instance-When demons escape hell, the son of devil must bring them back to prove himself a better guardian over his elder brotherAlthough I have a lRead more
mikepedley85 means that his goal -unless stated- would be to let the demons overrun the world “..his reasons are his own..” needs to be spelled out,
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When demons escape hell, the son of devil must bring them back to prove himself a better guardian over his elder brother
Although I have a love-hate relationship with the TVS format, I am interested in its differences from loglining for a feature film. So it must have enough juice to last a dozen hours & can be structured into Three Act for every episode. But when it comes to the whole, Is it the Second Act which must be elastic enough to bring most of the plot?
If so, the action of “..must bring the demons back..” is the second act. It paints a very specific premise which dictates the nature of your TVS. It becomes a narrative of catching demons. This is how your trailer would look like. This action will determine the kind of audience it attracts.
When a legendary assassin gets involved with his adversary’s daughter, he must fight for his life, taking on the adversary and multiple assassins, not aware that she may be his saving grace to survive and gain a strong ally.
It seems headed towards an anticlimactic resolution. So he doesn't yet know about her and in knowing this lies his chance of survival, but that's not very proactive or dramatic. You are missing on the Inciting Incident & him getting involved with her is clearly not it, since that changes nothingRead more
It seems headed towards an anticlimactic resolution. So he doesn’t yet know about her and in knowing this lies his chance of survival, but that’s not very proactive or dramatic.
See lessYou are missing on the Inciting Incident & him getting involved with her is clearly not it, since that changes nothing for him (as pointed by Richiev).
When a broken hearted assault victim finds self-defence classes, a hidden talent for martial arts is unlocked. Her powers are challenged by an enemy Kung Fu clan who seek to destroy her and the school. (Revised edition).
The "When a broken hearted assault victim finds self-defence classes, a hidden talent for martial arts is unlocked" bit feels either like a backstory or irrelevant, unless you suggest that the clan is associated with her assault.
The “When a broken hearted assault victim finds self-defence classes, a hidden talent for martial arts is unlocked” bit feels either like a backstory or irrelevant, unless you suggest that the clan is associated with her assault.
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