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A millionaire buys a 77-year-old plane. The broken machine will be restored for five years. After that, he and his son fly on historic routes around the world.
In the beginning, I think it's about a magic plane; then, I think it's going to be rebuilding the plane (similar to 'life as a house'); and finally, it just sounds like rich people going on vacation.
In the beginning, I think it’s about a magic plane; then, I think it’s going to be rebuilding the plane (similar to ‘life as a house’); and finally, it just sounds like rich people going on vacation.
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Being specific is your friend. Turning a world upside down isn?t a story. It can be used for nearly anything and that is the problem. How is his world turned upside down. ?Is he now being pursued? ?Is he in love with her, when he should kill her for revenge? Give us a goal, action, obstacle combinatRead more
Being specific is your friend. Turning a world upside down isn?t a story. It can be used for nearly anything and that is the problem.
How is his world turned upside down. ?Is he now being pursued? ?Is he in love with her, when he should kill her for revenge?
Give us a goal, action, obstacle combination.
See lessDiscovering he has super powers, an unstable, reclusive 18 year old is recruited by the Super Secret Service to help stop one their own wanting to use their combined powers to rule humanity.
I can't help but see the similarity between this and X-Men. Inciting incident - I wonder if this is not the discovery of his powers but the appearance of the antagonist. A superhero is nothing without a super-villain to fight and that gives us the question and answer. Protagonist - Unstable and reclRead more
I can’t help but see the similarity between this and X-Men.
Inciting incident – I wonder if this is not the discovery of his powers but the appearance of the antagonist. A superhero is nothing without a super-villain to fight and that gives us the question and answer.
Protagonist – Unstable and reclusive – I’d maybe pick one of these. In my mind the instability can easily suggest a lack of confidence and by arcing to becoming more stable they become more confident. I’m thinking of Rogue in X-Men. ?I also want to get a stronger sense of why we’re following this character. What specifically about this guy will mean he is the one who turns the tide against the bad guy. This is really important! He can’t just be another team member.
Goal – Perfectly acceptable goal. I’d consider writing a logline from the antagonist’s POV too though to make sure their motives are as 3-dimensional as the protagonist’s. They have to have a reason why they want to rule humanity. In X-Men (sorry to keep referring back to it) Magneto has a backstory, motive, and justification for his actions – whether you agree with him or not, you still understand his POV.
Hope this helps.
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