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  1. Posted: November 14, 2018In: Action

    After losing a competition and her partner, the competitive girl finds a new partner with skills in martial arts, which brings her dance skills to a new level and allows her to open up to a new possibility, unaware of the dangerous people looking for him.

    dpg Singularity
    Added an answer on November 14, 2018 at 6:50 am

    My impression is that the? martial arts fighter would be a more interesting, and hence, a better candidate to be the protagonist than? the dancer.? And so a better character around whom to frame the plot (and logline).For one? thing, the fighter is a "fish out of water" character,? the one who has tRead more

    My impression is that the? martial arts fighter would be a more interesting, and hence, a better candidate to be the protagonist than? the dancer.? And so a better character around whom to frame the plot (and logline).

    For one? thing, the fighter is a “fish out of water” character,? the one who has to adapt to a radically new role, a totally new situation, learn whole new moves.? The fighter has to learn to work with instead of fight against.?

    Further, he is the character who has to take the greater risks, faces the greater jeopardy because of the enemies he’s made.? He has more at risk, more to lose than the dancer does,? like his life.? What does the dancer have to lose other than her pride and the respect of her peers?? She already lost those in the setup.

    However,? I like that you want to cast a woman in the protagonist role.? So why not switch their roles?? He’s the dancer; she’s the fighter?

    fwiw

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  2. Posted: October 25, 2018In: Action

    A Secret Service agent, must kill the President to save the Presidency. After years in exile, he must help save his estranged daughter, the newest President, when she is taken hostage.

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    Added an answer on October 26, 2018 at 11:25 am

    As others noted, it's kind of confusing.? Did the guy actually assassinate the President -- or only conspire to (but the plot failed)?? {Either way, he wouldn't just be in exile -- he'd be in hiding.? Deep hiding. Because trying to? assassinate the President (no matter what the pretext) is the higheRead more

    As others noted, it’s kind of confusing.? Did the guy actually assassinate the President — or only conspire to (but the plot failed)?? {Either way, he wouldn’t just be in exile — he’d be in hiding.? Deep hiding. Because trying to? assassinate the President (no matter what the pretext) is the highest of high crimes.]

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  3. Posted: October 25, 2018In: Action

    Two cops must stop a drug cartel from unleashing his narcotic on the city before everyone becomes addicted.

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    Added an answer on October 26, 2018 at 3:48 am

    ...unleashing their narcotic... What kind of narcotic are we talking about and why will "everyone" use it and become addicted? Is it in the food? In the water?

    …unleashing their narcotic…

    What kind of narcotic are we talking about and why will “everyone” use it and become addicted? Is it in the food? In the water?

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