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An undercover policewoman lures a member of the Albanian mafia into a sexual relationship, in order to infiltrate and expose his gang’s cocaine trafficking.
Not a bad logline. The "who" and "goal" are clear. Even though the obstacles are implied, it would be nice to know more about the stakes. Maybe consider something like: "An undercover policewoman lures an Albanian mafia member into a sexual relationship in order to expose him, but ends up trying toRead more
Not a bad logline. The “who” and “goal” are clear. Even though the obstacles are implied, it would be nice to know more about the stakes.
Maybe consider something like:
“An undercover policewoman lures an Albanian mafia member into a sexual relationship in order to expose him, but ends up trying to protect herself and her loved ones when the situation becomes much more complicated than she could have ever imagined.”
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It reads like this is really about the family. If so, can you single out a family member to make the protagonist?
It reads like this is really about the family. If so, can you single out a family member to make the protagonist?
See lessWhen a man?s new world crashes down around him because his old world comes calling, he unleashes hell on everyone responsible ? starting at the bottom and working his way up.
"When his KGB arch enemy tracks him down, a retired CIA agent turned dog whisperer must unleash the hounds on his former enemy while keeping his former life secret from his straight-laced Presbyterian wife."
“When his KGB arch enemy tracks him down, a retired CIA agent turned dog whisperer must unleash the hounds on his former enemy while keeping his former life secret from his straight-laced Presbyterian wife.”
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