Sign Up Sign Up

Captcha Click on image to update the captcha.

Have an account? Sign In Now

Sign In Sign In

Forgot Password?

If you'd like access, Sign Up Here

Forgot Password Forgot Password

Lost your password? Please enter your email address. You will receive a link and will create a new password via email.

Captcha Click on image to update the captcha.

Have an account? Sign In Now

Sorry, you do not have permission to ask a question, You must login to ask a question.

Forgot Password?

To see everything, Sign Up Here

Please briefly explain why you feel this question should be reported.

Please briefly explain why you feel this answer should be reported.

Please briefly explain why you feel this user should be reported.

Logline It! Logo Logline It! Logo
Sign InSign Up

Logline It!

Logline It! Navigation

  • Sign Up
  • Logline Generator
  • Learn our simple Logline Formula
  • Search Loglines
Search
Post Your Logline

Mobile menu

Close
Post Your Logline
  • Signup
  • Sign Up
  • Logline Generator
  • Learn our simple Logline Formula
  • Search Loglines
  • Recent Loglines
  • Most Answered
  • Reviews
  • Feedback Wanted
  • Most Visited
  • Most Voted
  • Random
  1. Posted: February 9, 2018In: Action

    When an innocent man with amnesia convicted of murder wakes inside reality TV prison series, he learns that killing inmates is the only path to proving his innocence and gaining freedom.

    Valentin Samurai
    Added an answer on February 14, 2018 at 3:08 am

    I agree with the previous reviewers that retrieving his memories cannot be the prime driver. I still think there is a good base there. Hunger Games, Running Man will be mentioned but the concept that the elite use a game to blind the population to the reality of their situation is not new. After allRead more

    I agree with the previous reviewers that retrieving his memories cannot be the prime driver.
    I still think there is a good base there. Hunger Games, Running Man will be mentioned but the concept that the elite use a game to blind the population to the reality of their situation is not new. After all Rome invented the Arena for that purpose. The expression “Panem and Circenses”?that in Latin literally means “bread and circuses” was used to describe the cynical formula used by Roman emperors for keeping the masses content with ample food and entertainment.

    Personnally I would flip the script. He has his memories, he knows that he is innocent. In fact he volunteered for the show in order to prove that the game was rigged.

    In that dystopian world, Big Brother AI records everything, but access to unaltered version of video surveillance is restricted by security level. Participants to the show are supposed to be chosen randomly. The game is run by that an AI, so it is allegedly incorruptible. However high level executives have found a way so enemies and social undesirable are more likely to be selected. In the game, each victory unlocks points and with the points participants can purchase physical reward (food, weapons, medical supplies, …) or increase their security level. In order to release the video that show the high level executives rigging the game, the?hero needs to survive and kill a lot of people.

    In a dystopian world where victories in macabre TV reality show grant you Freedom, a principle man must kill his opponents to reveal how a mysterious cabal is staging a silent coup.

    See less
    • 0
    • Share
      Share
      • Share on Facebook
      • Share on Twitter
      • Share on LinkedIn
      • Share on WhatsApp
  2. Posted: February 7, 2018In: Action

    When a reserved college professor has her work stolen by an egotistical co-worker, she teams up with her assistant, a repo agent and a local tour guide to prevent him from unleashing an ancient demon on the world.

    Knightrider Mentor
    Added an answer on February 7, 2018 at 6:46 pm

    Yep, the Demon thing seems out of place unless you mention this professor is an expert in demonic practices so we have the setup. I would cut who they team up with for simplicity and just focus that their works have been stolen and about to be used to end the planet as we know it.

    Yep, the Demon thing seems out of place unless you mention this professor is an expert in demonic practices so we have the setup.

    I would cut who they team up with for simplicity and just focus that their works have been stolen and about to be used to end the planet as we know it.

    See less
    • 0
    • Share
      Share
      • Share on Facebook
      • Share on Twitter
      • Share on LinkedIn
      • Share on WhatsApp
  3. Posted: February 6, 2018In: Action

    When a sarcastic lesbian becomes best friends with the God of War, she gets dragged into a centuries long battle for the fate of mankind.

    dpg Singularity
    Added an answer on February 7, 2018 at 9:11 am

    >>>>she gets dragged into a centuries long battle for the fate of mankind.Against whom?? Who is the antagonist?>>>>her best friend gets indisposedHow can an Olympian god become indisposed?If you're going to play the lesbian card, why not have her partner up with Aphrodite (VeRead more

    >>>>she gets dragged into a centuries long battle for the fate of mankind.

    Against whom?? Who is the antagonist?

    >>>>her best friend gets indisposed

    How can an Olympian god become indisposed?

    If you’re going to play the lesbian card, why not have her partner up with Aphrodite (Venus)?? On whom she has an unrequited crush.? (Hence, more character conflict) And you might want to brush up on the Greek mythology.? Aphrodite set up the inciting incident for the Trojan War.? A cunning female like Aphrodite can let slip the dogs of war just as well as Mars or any man.

    See less
    • 0
    • Share
      Share
      • Share on Facebook
      • Share on Twitter
      • Share on LinkedIn
      • Share on WhatsApp

Sidebar

Stats

  • Loglines 8,018
  • Reviews 32,205
  • Best Reviews 629
  • Users 3,796

Adv 120x600

aalan

Explore

  • Signup

Footer

© 2022 Karel Segers. All Rights Reserved
With Love from Immersion Screenwriting.