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  1. Posted: May 10, 2017In: Action

    After a deadly missile attack on a U.S. commercial flight, a brilliant but arrogant safety engineer spearheading a revolutionary new anti-missile product investigates whether the defense contractor she works for is responsible for the attack and finds herself the target of an anti-government weapons retailer.

    Foxtrot25 Uberwriter
    Added an answer on May 10, 2017 at 11:31 pm

    A safety engineer works on an anti-missile product? Kind of a stretch, don't ya think? Now she is turned into an investigator? Lose brilliant but arrogant, that doesn't make me want to root for her at all. The big elephant is the lack of a clear goal and time bomb for her. What are the stakes she isRead more

    A safety engineer works on an anti-missile product? Kind of a stretch, don’t ya think? Now she is turned into an investigator? Lose brilliant but arrogant, that doesn’t make me want to root for her at all.

    The big elephant is the lack of a clear goal and time bomb for her. What are the stakes she is drawn into and what looming threat happens if she fails her task? Try ramping it up a bit.

    After a missile destroys a commercial airplane, a safety engineer realizes that the defense contractor she works for is responsible for the deadly attack. She must then uncover the ____ before ____ happens.

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  2. Posted: March 27, 2017In: Action

    unwitting uber driver tries to deliver the young teen he picked up safe after discovering she is chased by a group of terrorist.

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    Added an answer on May 10, 2017 at 6:03 am

    This is a very timely subject. You might consider adding information as to flesh out why the Uber driver "must" help?the teen?(what's stopping him from?just driving to the police station or dropping her off at a crowded?mall?), more of a description of the teen's character ?(e.g. non-English speakinRead more

    This is a very timely subject. You might consider adding information as to flesh out why the Uber driver “must” help?the teen?(what’s stopping him from?just driving to the police station or dropping her off at a crowded?mall?), more of a description of the teen’s character ?(e.g. non-English speaking, bloody, narcoleptic, dressed in a chicken costume or something), and what are the Uber driver’s personal stakes if he fails and the girl is captured or killed (does the teen have some kind of leverage against the Uber driver?)
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  3. Posted: April 11, 2017In: Action

    1892 Mycroft Holmes newly appointed to MI5 investigates a plan to undermine England’s position in Afghanistan not knowing the villains are a young Sherlock and Moriarty.

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    Richiev Singularity
    Added an answer on April 12, 2017 at 3:56 pm

    ?Master criminal Sherlock Homes and sidekick Moriarty plan to get rich by undermining England?s holdings in the east, but must outwit mother's favorite and oh-so-genius brother, Mycroft who has been appointed by MI5 to monitor the region.?

    ?Master criminal Sherlock Homes and sidekick Moriarty plan to get rich by undermining England?s holdings in the east, but must outwit mother’s favorite and oh-so-genius brother, Mycroft who has been appointed by MI5 to monitor the region.?

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