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  1. Posted: March 23, 2017In: Action

    A bad driver tries his best to save his job as an uber driver, finds his next trip with a terrorist who wants to explode a court with a bomb.

    dpg Singularity
    Added an answer on March 23, 2017 at 10:45 pm

    Agree with Richiev. ?Simplify, focus on the dramatic problem #1 -- the urgent need to stop the terrorist attack.>>thanks a lot, what about making his ex wife working in the court so he wanted to save her??Great for the plot proper. ?It certainly worked in "Die Hard" where the estranged wife woRead more

    Agree with Richiev. ?Simplify, focus on the dramatic problem #1 — the urgent need to stop the terrorist attack.

    >>thanks a lot, what about making his ex wife working in the court so he wanted to save her??

    Great for the plot proper. ?It certainly worked in “Die Hard” where the estranged wife works at the company whose employees the terrorists take hostage. ?But I don’t think it’s required for this logline. ?The stakes are implicitly high enough.

    It’s tempting to cram plot details into a logline, but a sign of a good logline is not when there is no more to add, but when there is no more to take out. ?With loglines, less is more.

    The guidelines under “Formula” at the top of web page list mandatory and optional required elements. Cramming in more is not only not necessary, but defeats the purpose of a logline.

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  2. Posted: March 23, 2017In: Action

    A military bioweapons collector engages in a game of ?cat and mouse? with his Russian counterpart who is also his former lover . The mysterious, subterranean world of the Taino Indians hides the only cure for the outbreak of an emerging virus. He has only hours amid growing civil unrest to find the cure before the virus destroys the tropical ?paradise? and releases a global pandemic.

    Richiev Singularity
    Added an answer on March 23, 2017 at 10:15 am

    "When a virus outbreak threatens the tropical island he is on, a military bioweapons collector must enter a Taino Indian subterranean cave system in pursuit of a cure, while being perused by his former lover turned enemy."

    “When a virus outbreak threatens the tropical island he is on, a military bioweapons collector must enter a Taino Indian subterranean cave system in pursuit of a cure, while being perused by his former lover turned enemy.”

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  3. Posted: February 18, 2017In: Action

    MISSLE: Limited fuel and the LAPD heat leave a severely disabled man just one night on his two- wheeled hand-built killing machine to seek and destroy the gang that brutally murdered his brother.

    Fma Samurai
    Added an answer on February 25, 2017 at 4:59 am

    "I hope the protagonist is not another White dude going after another Black or Chicano or Asian gang." I?have no idea?what movies you're referring. Studios and TV networks actually go out of their way to not stereotype.? Most of the time resulting in unintentional comedy

    “I hope the protagonist is not another White dude going after another Black or Chicano or Asian gang.”

    I?have no idea?what movies you’re referring.

    Studios and TV networks actually go out of their way to not stereotype.? Most of the time resulting in unintentional comedy

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