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  1. Posted: June 19, 2016In: Action

    When his girl disappears, a young man finds himself interfering in the last heist of an ageing crook who will stop at nothing to capture the girl he desperately needs to finish the job.

    dpg Singularity
    Added an answer on June 20, 2016 at 11:00 pm

    Has the girl disappeared because the ageing crook kidnapped her? ?Or are both of them looking for the girl?And isn't his objective goal to rescue the girl? ? Isn't interfering in the heist ?just a means to his objective goal, not the objective goal?And what's at stake? What does he (and the girl) stRead more

    Has the girl disappeared because the ageing crook kidnapped her? ?Or are both of them looking for the girl?

    And isn’t his objective goal to rescue the girl? ? Isn’t interfering in the heist ?just a means to his objective goal, not the objective goal?

    And what’s at stake? What does he (and the girl) stand to lose if he fails and/or the crook succeeds? ?I mean, after the job is done, wouldn’t she be free to go back to him, resume their relationship?

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  2. Posted: June 14, 2016In: Action

    Pressured into attending a frat party, an introverted college student must face-off with an aggressive frat boy to save herself from becoming a rape victim.

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    Added an answer on June 18, 2016 at 4:02 am

    >>Also, in order to avoid making it look like I?m trying to capitalize on national headlines, I can nix the word ?rape.?You're needlessly handicapping yourself. ?I don't believe that there would be penalty points for capitalizing on a current event. ?It's SOP in the biz. ?It's a tried-and-trueRead more

    >>Also, in order to avoid making it look like I?m trying to capitalize on national headlines, I can nix the word ?rape.?

    You’re needlessly handicapping yourself. ?I don’t believe that there would be penalty points for capitalizing on a current event. ?It’s SOP in the biz. ?It’s a tried-and-true, time-honored way of promoting a script. (And you wrote the script well before the Stanford scandal, right?)

    So name the threat. ?Don’t leave it up to a logline reader to guess.

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  3. Posted: June 10, 2016In: Action

    In a dust chocked world where the rich live in air ships and the poor in muck a dethroned princess and desperate criminal must join forces to stop a megalomaniac from seizing absolute control.

    dpg Singularity
    Added an answer on June 11, 2016 at 8:12 am

    Hate to choke on a detail but doesn't muck connotes mud, slime -- subtances that are wet? ?So how is all this muck possible in ?a dust-choked (ergo dry, arid) world?

    Hate to choke on a detail but doesn’t muck connotes mud, slime — subtances that are wet? ?So how is all this muck possible in ?a dust-choked (ergo dry, arid) world?

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