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While tackling the climb that killed their father – Everest’s infamous Fantasy Ridge – an estranged sister and brother must face their issues or suffer the same fate.
http://www.explorersweb.com/webtv/routes/aerial-routes.jpg The Fantasy Ridge can be found in this map of routes of Everest, it shows it pretty clearly. ?The later maps stopped naming it because it hasn't even been partially climbed at this point. It is the only unclimbed ?ridge left on the East FaceRead more
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The Fantasy Ridge can be found in this map of routes of Everest, it shows it pretty clearly. ?The later maps stopped naming it because it hasn’t even been partially climbed at this point. It is the only unclimbed ?ridge left on the East Face (Kangshung) and it would be Route 19 if ever climbed. There have in fact been 8 attempts as of 2016 all ending in failures that I heard of could be more, luckily there has been only one casualty no fatality unlike the the rest of the ‘King Route’s which have a high fatality rate. This will probably change however the more people try. I know of a Swedish and an American team that plan on an?attempt in 2017 weather permitting. The entire area is the most deadly area of Everest compared to successful summit attempts. After failure in 06 I?summited both the normal routes in 2009 and 10. ?Probably will never go back myself tho I got very ill with acute bronchitis after my summit in 2010. ? Hope that helps. You can increase the fatality rate if that helps the narrative.?
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Fun for sure. ?But it's odd they'd be fighting... to get together. ?Reunification is most easily achieved through cooperation so... ?If they were fighting for the majority of the body, that I would get. This feels like Jet Li's "the One":?A sheriff's deputy fights an alternate universe version of hiRead more
Fun for sure. ?But it’s odd they’d be fighting… to get together. ?Reunification is most easily achieved through cooperation so… ?If they were fighting for the majority of the body, that I would get.
This feels like Jet Li’s “the One”:?A sheriff’s deputy fights an alternate universe version of himself who grows stronger with each alternate self he kills.
If they’re fighting it’s for control. ?Not reunification.
The obvious solution is, the protagonist wants reunification, and the antagonist just wants the body parts.
See lessA rebellious spy returns to his hometown when “save the Earth”-promoting terrorists take it over for ransom.
Agreed with DPG. Regarding the structure of the logline it ends on the inciting incident, therefore best to change it so it starts with the event that puts the wheels in motion. After terrorists hold his home town for ransom... In this instance I would suggest specifying one of the terrorists as theRead more
Agreed with DPG.
Regarding the structure of the logline it ends on the inciting incident, therefore best to change it so it starts with the event that puts the wheels in motion.
After terrorists hold his home town for ransom…
In this instance I would suggest specifying one of the terrorists as the antagonist. The most violent one will make for the cliche ‘bad guy’ and if anything help define the action the main character will take.
Lastly good suggestion by Richieve to mention the sister and raise the personal stakes even more.
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