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After an American ambassador discovers he fathered a child in Mexico twelve years ago, he and his son’s gay adoptive parents must rescue him from the clutches of a ruthless drug lord who also claims to be the boy’s father before the child succumbs to a life-threatening disease.
Sure is tough to get a logline on this one under 30 words lol, a lot to this story. Here is an attempt: ----- "When their adopted son is kidnapped by a ruthless drug lord who claims to be the kid's real father, a gay couple and the child's biological dad team up to rescue the boy from the criminal'sRead more
Sure is tough to get a logline on this one under 30 words lol, a lot to this story.
Here is an attempt:
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“When their adopted son is kidnapped by a ruthless drug lord who claims to be the kid’s real father, a gay couple and the child’s biological dad team up to rescue the boy from the criminal’s seemingly impregnable compound.”
(Perhaps add, before the kid dies from kidney failure, but that would really make the logline long)
See lessMaximus comes back to life as his body is ignited on the funeral pyre, sparking an escape and betrayal rife with visions of heaven and hell which condemn him back to the coliseum.
What is his aim. What are the goals of the story. What may stop him? Just a general observation. A lot of your loglines are pretty but lack any story. Don’t believe the idea that a logline has to be mystical and ambiguous. It is a micro job interview. A producer reads thousands of loglines. She is nRead more
What is his aim. What are the goals of the story. What may stop him?
Just a general observation. A lot of your loglines are pretty but lack any story. Don’t believe the idea that a logline has to be mystical and ambiguous. It is a micro job interview. A producer reads thousands of loglines. She is not going to stop and investigate a logline which is pretty but says very little. There are 999 others that may have a good story.
The Gadiator Maximus resurrected during his cremation …… [insert story here].
See lessWhen a devoted bodyguard inherits his dead employer’s debts, he must fight a crooked businessman who was both a good friend and partner to the deceased to save his life and that of the daughter of the death boss, with whom his affair are becoming ever more prevalent.
Need to change the other deceased to either passed or died and not 2X.
Need to change the other deceased to either passed or died and not 2X.
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