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After being permanently transformed into a penguin during an operation, a disgraced MI6 agent is offered redemption to spy on a villainous family by acting as their daughter’s newest adorable pet.
Love it. I actually laughed out loud. I think you could tighten it up on the back-end. Flesh out the villainous family. Maybe they are crime lords / drug dealers who use animal rights activism (or the world's largest online pet store) as a front. Tie the villains to some seemingly legitimate use ofRead more
Love it. I actually laughed out loud.
I think you could tighten it up on the back-end. Flesh out the villainous family. Maybe they are crime lords / drug dealers who use animal rights activism (or the world’s largest online pet store) as a front. Tie the villains to some seemingly legitimate use of animals.
Maybe their “villainous” streak is that they own a fishing fleet that uses driftnet fishing and actually kills mass numbers of penguins in their fishing boats’ nets.
See lessFood is scarce, tragedies are many but the fight against human extinction becomes an arduous mission for mans earliest pioneers.
Who is the lead character? What do they want? What is standing in their way?
Who is the lead character?
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What is standing in their way?
In the middle of Nazi Germany, a shy girl and her imaginary monster try to rescue her father, who has disappeared.
I think this logline is solid because any questions I might have will probably be answered during the course of the story. Character: Shy Girl Goal: Rescue/Find her father Outer Obstical: Nazi's Inner Obstacle: She's shy but must go outside Twist: There is an imaginary monster
I think this logline is solid because any questions I might have will probably be answered during the course of the story.
Character: Shy Girl
See lessGoal: Rescue/Find her father
Outer Obstical: Nazi’s
Inner Obstacle: She’s shy but must go outside
Twist: There is an imaginary monster