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  1. Posted: September 15, 2020In: Adventure

    Some believe We are One with all there is, connected to the spiritual realms, forces of Nature, animals and are born to do good unto others. But, when the darkness in our world grows too strong, what brings those of the Oneness, three women and a man together, to rise up against the Roman Empire and their God of War?

    Richiev Singularity
    Added an answer on September 16, 2020 at 9:14 am

    A 50+ word sentence in the form of a question and other than it has something to do with the Roman Empire I have no idea what I will see on screen. Who is the lead character? What do they want? What is standing in their way?

    A 50+ word sentence in the form of a question and other than it has something to do with the Roman Empire I have no idea what I will see on screen.

    Who is the lead character?
    What do they want?
    What is standing in their way?

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  2. Posted: September 7, 2020In: Adventure

    When an unremarkable school janitor finds a secret doorway that leads to another dimension, he enters a parallell universe in which he has the possibility save his great love who was killed twenty years ago.

    Inga Penpusher
    Added an answer on September 7, 2020 at 10:57 pm

    It would be nice if his quest to save his love was somehow related to the school enviroment, so it's all connected to the arena of the school. Like she died in a school fire, or by bullying etc

    It would be nice if his quest to save his love was somehow related to the school enviroment, so it’s all connected to the arena of the school. Like she died in a school fire, or by bullying etc

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  3. Posted: July 7, 2020In: Adventure

    A wealthy oblivious drawing artist raised by animals unfreezes a painted river to stop his artistic ego from not seeing his forest-dwelling family before he moves away from home.

    Spencer222 Logliner
    Added an answer on July 7, 2020 at 12:57 pm

    I do not understand the story world. If the kid wants to leave home, where would he go? Is the larger world full of human-like animals or is he crossing over to our world? Does he literally paint over the river or does he create a painting of the river? Is he rich and successful before the story begRead more

    I do not understand the story world. If the kid wants to leave home, where would he go? Is the larger world full of human-like animals or is he crossing over to our world?
    Does he literally paint over the river or does he create a painting of the river?
    Is he rich and successful before the story begins?
    Is the inciting incident the painting, or the discovery of the effects of the painting?
    I would focus on the sites suggested log line format for now. [Flawed Protag] [Event] [Action]

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