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A shy movie fan and his crush are magically pulled into a 1930s adventure film and must race a power gangster to a legendary treasure in order to return to the real world.
If we knew what the treasure was would it explain why that thing can bring them back to the real world? I really like the premise but I?d like to understand the connection.
If we knew what the treasure was would it explain why that thing can bring them back to the real world? I really like the premise but I?d like to understand the connection.
See lessA wallflower decides to come off the wall and make the world her stage.
A logline is very specific. It is a very short description of the plot. Inciting incident, a lead character, goal, and conflict. What you have written is more of a blurb... "In space, no one can hear you scream" Two completely different things. A blurb is used to tease an audience into watching yourRead more
A logline is very specific. It is a very short description of the plot. Inciting incident, a lead character, goal, and conflict.
What you have written is more of a blurb… “In space, no one can hear you scream”
Two completely different things.
A blurb is used to tease an audience into watching your movie. (After the movie is made and about to come to theaters)
A logline is used to sell your script. (Before your script has even been seen by a studio)
However, I would definitely keep some of this in the logline.
When (This thing happens to the lead character) a wallflower is forced to come off the wall if she’s too (Accomplish this goal)
See lessWhen a prominent black surgeon in New York does a DNA test to find his family he finds out that he is from a small community of great hunters in ‘Arnhem Land. His life is thrust into chaos when he must cast off the silken symbols of civilization, to become the man, the hunter, the person he has been yearning for his entire life.
Ozymale59: Based upon? the additional information you provided, here is a 25 word version: When DNA testing reveals that a Black American is really descended from Australian aborigines, he abandons modern life to become a paleo-hunter in the Outback. As someone who gets hung up on the credibility ofRead more
Ozymale59:
Based upon? the additional information you provided, here is a 25 word version:
When DNA testing reveals that a Black American is really descended from Australian aborigines, he abandons modern life to become a paleo-hunter in the Outback.
As someone who gets hung up on the credibility of story ideas, I find it completely credible? that an Australian Aborigine could “pass” or be mistaken for a Black in the United States.
This is a movie I want to see.? Very best wishes with your script.
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