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While on a routine mission, the angel of death awakens the wrath of the apocalypse and must travel through hell to find his redemption.
How will traveling through hell help the angel find redemption? You might need some sort of specific at this part of the logline. Does the angel have a suitcase, take pictures with his iphone and maybe stop at some of the tourist attractions? What does the angel do during his travels through hell? NRead more
How will traveling through hell help the angel find redemption?
You might need some sort of specific at this part of the logline.
Does the angel have a suitcase, take pictures with his iphone and maybe stop at some of the tourist attractions? What does the angel do during his travels through hell?
Now if the Angel must kill or stop a specific demon in hell that would probably make more sense. If that’s the case you might want to add that specific to your logline.
See lessA shy movie fan and his crush are magically pulled into a 1930s adventure film and must race a power gangster to a legendary treasure in order to return to the real world.
If we knew what the treasure was would it explain why that thing can bring them back to the real world? I really like the premise but I?d like to understand the connection.
If we knew what the treasure was would it explain why that thing can bring them back to the real world? I really like the premise but I?d like to understand the connection.
See lessA wallflower decides to come off the wall and make the world her stage.
A logline is very specific. It is a very short description of the plot. Inciting incident, a lead character, goal, and conflict. What you have written is more of a blurb... "In space, no one can hear you scream" Two completely different things. A blurb is used to tease an audience into watching yourRead more
A logline is very specific. It is a very short description of the plot. Inciting incident, a lead character, goal, and conflict.
What you have written is more of a blurb… “In space, no one can hear you scream”
Two completely different things.
A blurb is used to tease an audience into watching your movie. (After the movie is made and about to come to theaters)
A logline is used to sell your script. (Before your script has even been seen by a studio)
However, I would definitely keep some of this in the logline.
When (This thing happens to the lead character) a wallflower is forced to come off the wall if she’s too (Accomplish this goal)
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