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During a wedding rehearsal, a bridesmaid is taken by pirates and becomes the prize of the battle of ego vs revenge between two of the most powerful pirate ships.
What is the protagonist of your story? the pirates? the woman? Why do pirates take the lady? She is special?
What is the protagonist of your story? the pirates? the woman? Why do pirates take the lady? She is special?
See lessAfter his colony laughs on his claims of rising sea level, Mr. Penguin sets out with his family to reach “high grounds” before the ice melts
Being laughed at ultimately isn't what makes him seek higher ground but instead, it is discovering sea levels are rising.?The inciting incident should be how he learns the sea level is rising.
Being laughed at ultimately isn’t what makes him seek higher ground but instead, it is discovering sea levels are rising.?The inciting incident should be how he learns the sea level is rising.
See less3 siblings set out on an adventure with their father?s friend, a professor, to find out what caused his disappearance and stop the power that could destroy humanity that he was looking for.
I find this far too vague. ?The stakes seem high but what is the hook? ?What kind of professor? ?What kind of power that can destroy humanity? Is it supernatural, is it manmade, is it alien? ?Do you need all 3 siblings? ?Why? ?Can't it be one child perhaps connecting with the father's estranged partRead more
I find this far too vague. ?The stakes seem high but what is the hook? ?What kind of professor? ?What kind of power that can destroy humanity? Is it supernatural, is it manmade, is it alien? ?Do you need all 3 siblings? ?Why? ?Can’t it be one child perhaps connecting with the father’s estranged partner for example? ?Why does the Dad’s friend agree to go on this journey? ?Perhaps they are more than friends? ?Estranged colleagues? ?Former lovers? ?I need more specificity and more connective tissue with the characters.
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