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When a plane crashes in the Alaska wilderness, two remaining survivors must find civilization before winter.
The premise sounds like it has great potential as a man v wild adventure, but as mentioned above the logline lacks detail. I would add that the structure is working against the logline, as DPG said, best if you check out the training section at the top bar. The search for survivors is irrelevant toRead more
The premise sounds like it has great potential as a man v wild adventure, but as mentioned above the logline lacks detail.
I would add that the structure is working against the logline, as DPG said, best if you check out the training section at the top bar.
The search for survivors is irrelevant to the plot of the two people doing battle with nature, as they would presumably not be aware of the attempts and if they were it wouldn’t change what they do by much. Best to use the precious logline real-estate of the opening clause?to describe the crash and the main characters.
Further more, ?an un expected obstacle on top of the obvious ?bad weather and starvation?would elevate this concept and its level of interest.
See lessStranded in the middle of Peru, a travel writer and an archeologist find themselves caught in a race against a familiar foe for an enchanted artifact (and maybe even falling for each other along the way.)
What is the main character goal and who or what is the opponent? where does the conflict come from?
What is the main character goal and who or what is the opponent? where does the conflict come from?
See less?In the desolate future, when an isolated and curious teenager is suddenly forced from his collapsing underground bunker into the overgrown wilderness outside, he will have to survive long enough to make a few allies if he is to find his little sister, rumored to be alive.?
Best to describe the events in order i.e inciting incident (sister is taken) then the action (fight for, search for or bargain with to get her back) goal (get the sister back). For example: After his sister is taken by a lawless gang in a post apocalypse desolate future, a [good description] teen muRead more
Best to describe the events in order i.e inciting incident (sister is taken) then the action (fight for, search for or bargain with to get her back) goal (get the sister back).
For example:
See lessAfter his sister is taken by a lawless gang in a post apocalypse desolate future, a [good description] teen must [compelling action] to get his sister back.