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  1. Posted: September 7, 2021In: Adventure

    When a little fish gets kidnapped by humans, it must break out of the aquarium and find back to its parents.

    Richiev Singularity
    Added an answer on September 7, 2021 at 1:57 pm

    Is this finding Nemo? Just curious. ----- "After his son disappears, a neurotic clownfish teams with a forget full surgeonfish in order to track down his missing son."

    Is this finding Nemo? Just curious.
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    “After his son disappears, a neurotic clownfish teams with a forget full surgeonfish in order to track down his missing son.”

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  2. Posted: September 7, 2021In: Adventure

    When a spell is set upon the land a young warrior must fight for her independence.

    Cajsa Penpusher
    Added an answer on September 7, 2021 at 3:12 am

    You have all the components which is great! But the logline is a bit vauge and would benefit from some clarity. What kind of spell is it? Who cast it and why? Why must the young warrior fight for her independence? Who is the young warrior and how will she fight?

    You have all the components which is great! But the logline is a bit vauge and would benefit from some clarity. What kind of spell is it? Who cast it and why? Why must the young warrior fight for her independence? Who is the young warrior and how will she fight?

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  3. Posted: September 4, 2021In: Adventure

    We are One with all there is. When the darkness of the Roman Empire grows too strong four people are brought together by those of the light to make the Empire begin to crumble and fall.

    Odie Samurai
    Added an answer on September 7, 2021 at 2:49 am

    Consider the following: I can envision an expanse of the Roman empire, but what brought these four protags together and “those of the light” is not in focus. Check out examples in Formula (link header) to help. When a [CHARACTER], is [confronted by a MAJOR EVENT], s/he must [do the ACTION/GOAL]. or:Read more

    Consider the following:
    I can envision an expanse of the Roman empire, but what brought these four protags together and “those of the light” is not in focus.

    Check out examples in Formula (link header) to help.
    When a [CHARACTER], is [confronted by a MAJOR EVENT], s/he must [do the ACTION/GOAL].
    or:
    A [CHARACTER], must [do the ACTION/GOAL] when [a MAJOR EVENT occurs].

    Hope you find this constructive, take care.

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