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Sally Mitchell, after having a drunken one night stand with Chris Rogers, finds herself pregnant with twins. Sally and Chris move in together, , forcing their best friends and housemates Dean Smith and Melissa Pearce to do the same, resulting in four twenty somethings having to grow up faster than they wanted to.
BTW this may very well be a great story, but the logline itself spends way too much time telling us the set-up to the story but then tells us nothing about what the lead character's goal is, now that this event has happened, what must the lead character actually do.
BTW this may very well be a great story, but the logline itself spends way too much time telling us the set-up to the story but then tells us nothing about what the lead character’s goal is, now that this event has happened, what must the lead character actually do.
See lessOn meeting witches who fantasize him and have golden teeth, a boy who thinks his crush is out of his league decides to steal their teeth while they battle for his affections.
Thank You Very Much :) Nir Shelter I'll try my best at improving the Logline.
Thank You Very Much 🙂
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I’ll try my best at improving the Logline.
A desperate Mexican single mother, looking to win back custody of her son living in America, kidnaps a US border guard and uses him as a coyote, unaware that her hostage is the Homeland security secretary?s nephew.
The MC comes across as farcical (good for comedy) but also insane to think this plan would work (might also be good for comedy, can't say). Ultimately, the suspension of disbelief is going to be the biggest problem. If this is an Austin Powers style OTT 'anything goes' comedy, then sure any plan wilRead more
The MC comes across as farcical (good for comedy) but also insane to think this plan would work (might also be good for comedy, can’t say). Ultimately, the suspension of disbelief is going to be the biggest problem. If this is an Austin Powers style OTT ‘anything goes’ comedy, then sure any plan will do, but if this is meant to be a more gritty/reality based comedy I doubt the plan will work.
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