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FAKING THE BAND After concocting a scheme to achieve popularity and infamy a junior high rock band is forced to confront the fact they can?t play a single song when a spiteful teacher plans to expose their charade by awarding them a spot in the schools annual variety show.
PISTOLS & CARNATIONS When a passionate but shitty junior high rock band concocts a scheme to achieve popularity and infamy at their school's highly coveted variety show, its not only a success it goes viral and catches the attention of Super-Producer David Geffen. Now they have one Saturday nighRead more
PISTOLS & CARNATIONS
See lessWhen a passionate but shitty junior high rock band concocts a scheme to achieve popularity and infamy at their school’s highly coveted variety show, its not only a success it goes viral and catches the attention of Super-Producer David Geffen. Now they have one Saturday night at the famed Whiskey a Go Go on the Sunset Strip in Hollywood to prove they’re the real thing.
FARTACUS – An NC-17 bawdy adventure set in Ancient Rome: When a lowly slave is mistaken for aristocratic progeny he has one chance to outwits rivals, seduces virgin nobles, and cons the Gods on his improbable road to becoming Caesar.
Being that this is to be NC-17, I think Spurtacus would be a more adult movie title.
Being that this is to be NC-17, I think Spurtacus would be a more adult movie title.
See lessTHE EGG AND I- A blindly driven 40-year-old woman is told she’s too old to have a baby but may have a shot if she finds sperm in a week, she finds a fortuitous donor, while her ex-bestie manipulates him, attempting to block her from finding unexpected love and one good egg.
Let me see if I can parse this:>>is told she?s too old to have a babySays who? ?Her hair dresser? ?Her office co-workers? ?A her gynecologist, after an examination?>>>may have a shot This seems to contradict the previous statement because if she were ?too old, ?she would not even haveRead more
Let me see if I can parse this:
>>is told she?s too old to have a baby
Says who? ?Her hair dresser? ?Her office co-workers? ?A her gynecologist, after an examination?
>>>may have a shot
This seems to contradict the previous statement because if she were ?too old, ?she would not even have a shot.
>>>if she finds sperm in a week
I know there’s an optimal window each month in the menstrual cycle ?– but if she misses the window of opportunity next week, can’t she try again next month? ?IOW; I don’t find “next week or never” to be credible.
>>>she finds a fortuitous donor
That was fast
Too fast. ?Nothing should be quick and easy for the main character, particularly in finding the sin qua non, the right man to make her pregnant.
What if her dramatic dilemma is that she urgently feels the biological clock ticking down ?– but she also wants a donor who ?matches her impossibly high standards for a sire? ?
I mean, why is she still single? What is the real character flaw that got her into this predicament?
>>>while her ex-bestie manipulates him,
A mid-point complication for the plot, but in any event extraneous for the purpose of a logline. ? Why? Because you’ve only got 25-30 words ideally, 40 words absolute max — your version is 48 — to ?lay out the key elements in the plot. (As enumerated under “Formula” at the top of the web page). There’s no ?spare space to squeeze in midpoint ?complications or shocking 3rd Act reveals.
fwiw
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