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  1. Posted: February 22, 2017In: Comedy

    After losing everything to an emotionally sophisticated rival, the one-time ?king of high school? gets a chance to win it all back when he starts visualizing the desires of anyone he touches.

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    Added an answer on February 22, 2017 at 1:45 am

    "Losing everything" -- what does that mean? ? What's at stake? "Emotionally sophisticated " -- what does that mean? ?And rather than characterize the antagonist, the logline would do better to characterize the protagonist. Why should we want to root for the ex-king to regain whatever he lost? How, sRead more

    “Losing everything” — what does that mean? ? What’s at stake?
    “Emotionally sophisticated ” — what does that mean? ?And rather than characterize the antagonist, the logline would do better to characterize the protagonist.
    Why should we want to root for the ex-king to regain whatever he lost?
    How, specifically, will this visualization enable him to climb back on top of the social heap?

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  2. Posted: January 23, 2017In: Comedy

    After lying about being pregnant in order to spite her philandering partner, an antisocial young punk must face up to her responsibilities as she begins to realise the lengths to which he is willing to go in order to change his ways and face up to his.

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    Added an answer on February 20, 2017 at 2:07 pm

    I am not sure what the goal of the lead character is... From reading this, it seems as if the philandering partner should be the lead character since they are the one who goes through the change.

    I am not sure what the goal of the lead character is…

    From reading this, it seems as if the philandering partner should be the lead character since they are the one who goes through the change.

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  3. Posted: February 19, 2017In: Comedy

    When he starts visualizing the desires of anyone he touches, a lovelorn but clueless teen has one week to win his true love before she leaves for college.

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    Added an answer on February 19, 2017 at 1:44 pm

    Is there a cause for this new found ability? Does the lead get hit in the head? Get bitten by a radioactive monkey? Get electrocuted while touching himself? Just curious.

    Is there a cause for this new found ability? Does the lead get hit in the head? Get bitten by a radioactive monkey? Get electrocuted while touching himself? Just curious.

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