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  1. Posted: April 9, 2016In: Comedy

    When a Jewish underpants manufacturer suddenly dies, his clumsy, mechanic son must fight off a stupid Mafia loan-shark, until he can convince the inventive transvestite manager to relinquish control.

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    Added an answer on April 9, 2016 at 7:33 pm

    Hello, I don't get the relation between the parts... jewish, underpants, mafia, transvestites... theese are colorful details but I can't see a pattern, a structure, a solid story.

    Hello,
    I don’t get the relation between the parts… jewish, underpants, mafia, transvestites… theese are colorful details but I can’t see a pattern, a structure, a solid story.

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  2. Posted: March 28, 2016In: Comedy

    When a nerdy Greek scholarship holder fall in love with his popstar fellow student, they face a long-distance relationship as she is on world tour always traveling and he threatens to lose his top-mark college grant due to lovesickness.

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    Added an answer on March 29, 2016 at 8:33 pm

    Hello, I remember old versions of this... I think you still spread the interest on too many events - my personal opinion is that you have to pick the one inciting event, the one problem, the one goal. Focus on a single storyline. This movie can't start with a young greak dreaming to be accepted in aRead more

    Hello, I remember old versions of this… I think you still spread the interest on too many events – my personal opinion is that you have to pick the one inciting event, the one problem, the one goal. Focus on a single storyline. This movie can’t start with a young greak dreaming to be accepted in an american college, winning the grant,?winning the?love of a popstar, facing lovesickness… this could work in a book, maybe.

    For exemple,

    When his popstar grilfriend leaves for?a world tour, a neardy geek must beat?his lovesickness to keep his college grant.

    But there are still many problems, because how can a fight against lovesickness be filmed? What we will see in the movie? And the genre should be clear, is it a love drama or a comedy?

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  3. Posted: March 23, 2016In: Comedy

    The Jewish Director – A struggling director pretends he’s Jewish thinking it will help him break into the biz.

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    Added an answer on March 23, 2016 at 10:14 pm

    I agree with FFF that the story needs to indicate the source of conflict.? What is the specific incident or problem that incited him try such a desperate measure and what dramatic problem does his trying to pass as Jewish create?? (And obviously trying to pass is a false ?solution.? It seemingly solRead more

    I agree with FFF that the story needs to indicate the source of conflict.? What is the specific incident or problem that incited him try such a desperate measure and what dramatic problem does his trying to pass as Jewish create?? (And obviously trying to pass is a false ?solution.? It seemingly solves ?one problem? only to?creates others that are?even worse.)

    Also, if you’re not Jewish ?yourself, I suggest you?tread carefully, do your research.? Hollywood is?heavily populated?by Jews and they are not amused by Gentiles, ?goyim, ?who depict? them through stereotypes and parody.? Just saying.

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