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Zen O’Clock (Pilot) – An office lackey buys an alarm clock possessed with the soul of a world renowned self-help guru and takes advice from it on how to improve his daily life.
As FFF said.? A story is not about the solution, it's about a problem in need of a solution.? And any solution the protagonist comes up with so early in the story is a false solution.? Even more so when it comes so cheaply, when it is unearned;? all he had to do was unwittingly by a used clock. ExacRead more
As FFF said.? A story is not about the solution, it’s about a problem in need of a solution.? And any solution the protagonist comes up with so early in the story is a false solution.? Even more so when it comes so cheaply, when it is unearned;? all he had to do was unwittingly by a used clock.
Exactly how does he need to “improve”?his life?? Even if it’s a comedy, he must be in desperate? need of advice to struggle with major life issues that threaten his life, liberty and pursuit of happiness.? And the advice the? Zen O’clock gives must be exactly what he doesn’t want to do, what he doesn’t think he can do.
See lessWhen a nerdy Greek scholarship holder fall in love with his popstar fellow student, the young relationship goes through tough times as she is living in a celebrity bubble always busy when he needs her presence.
College? High School? I like the idea of a nerdy greek and a popstar togheter but I can't see a plot here. I make 2 suggestions: 1) figure out why exacly the greek NEED the support of his girlfriend. 2) figure out what is the main specific problem of their relationship. So, the nerdy greek will haveRead more
College? High School?
See lessI like the idea of a nerdy greek and a popstar togheter but I can’t see a plot here. I make 2 suggestions: 1) figure out why exacly the greek NEED the support of his girlfriend. 2) figure out what is the main specific problem of their relationship.
So, the nerdy greek will have a clear goal and a clear obstacle to overcome. And that will be a story.
When a would-be comic peers into a shrink’s patient files to get new comedy material, he gets himself and the shrink he loves into a lot of trouble.
As FFF said.A logline's target audience is movie makers.? A teaser or blurb's target audience is?movie viewers.? Different markets requiring different strategies.The concept has a lot of potential.? But what's the twist?? What's the unintended consequences?? What's the blowback that happens becauseRead more
As FFF said.
A logline’s target audience is movie makers.? A teaser or blurb’s target audience is?movie viewers.? Different markets requiring different strategies.
The concept has a lot of potential.? But what’s the twist?? What’s the unintended consequences?? What’s the blowback that happens because of his purloining?? What’s the inevitable and well-deserved retribution for exposing and exploiting the private problems of other people?
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