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  1. Posted: March 2, 2016In: Comedy

    When seven year old Olive needs to get to a far away beauty pageant her family accompanies her on an arduous road trip.

    dpg Singularity
    Added an answer on March 5, 2016 at 5:00 am

    I emphasized the aspect of dreams in my version because that's the thematic thread running through?most of the characters. The?father?fails to?realize his business dream. His son fails to realize ?his dream of getting into the air force. The brother-in-law?has failed so abysmally in realizing his drRead more

    I emphasized the aspect of dreams in my version because that’s the thematic thread running through?most of the characters.

    The?father?fails to?realize his business dream.

    His son fails to realize ?his dream of getting into the air force.

    The brother-in-law?has failed so abysmally in realizing his dreams that he attempts suicide — and ?he even fails at that.

    And the daughter only gets into a “superfluous” beauty pageant by accident — and ends up?getting ?ejected.? So much for her dream.

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  2. Posted: February 27, 2016In: Comedy

    a narcissistic young woman must learn to love unconditionally before she can save her suicidal friend, after a hunky surfer interrupts her rehabilitation plan she has organised for her friend’s recovery.

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    Added an answer on February 28, 2016 at 10:21 pm

    Hello, is it really a comedy? In this case it should?be clear from the logline itself.

    Hello, is it really a comedy? In this case it should?be clear from the logline itself.

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  3. Posted: February 26, 2016In: Comedy

    Recent English grad sets out to climb the corporate ladder of a tech company, with only the jets setting CEO?s memoir as a guide.

    Neer Shelter Singularity
    Added an answer on February 26, 2016 at 10:28 am

    The plot is vague due to lack of story detail. What motivates the main character to need to climb the corporate ladder? What was the event that made him or her need to pursue a career in business? Secondly what is the definitive objective they must achieve which will make it clear the goal of corporRead more

    The plot is vague due to lack of story detail.

    What motivates the main character to need to climb the corporate ladder? What was the event that made him or her need to pursue a career in business?
    Secondly what is the definitive objective they must achieve which will make it clear the goal of corporate success was achieved?? In other words what is the specific story goal?

    It could be to be made CEO themselves for example.

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