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  1. Posted: December 9, 2015In: Comedy

    A vampire hunter is frustrated when an isolated Mississippi town decides due process must be followed before she will be allowed to stake a dangerous vampire. – Blood and Justice

    victortiti89 Penpusher
    Added an answer on December 9, 2015 at 8:57 pm

    Very interesting story idea... Just make sure you follow what others have to say and it will make for an awesome story. The only thing I wouldn't personally like is to turn this into a kind of drama, but that's just my personal taste... Anyway, good luck with this! I'd surely hope to see this on scrRead more

    Very interesting story idea… Just make sure you follow what others have to say and it will make for an awesome story. The only thing I wouldn’t personally like is to turn this into a kind of drama, but that’s just my personal taste… Anyway, good luck with this! I’d surely hope to see this on screen one day!:)

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  2. Posted: November 18, 2015In: Comedy

    A trio of combat veterans find solace in helping others leave their relationships

    Richiev Singularity
    Added an answer on November 20, 2015 at 8:15 am

    What you have described is the 'norm' The story set-up begins with everything normal, then something comes along which changes things. 'A fly in the ointment'. Here would be an example of a fly in the ointment. ----- A trio of combat veterans who find solace in helping helping individuals leave relaRead more

    What you have described is the ‘norm’

    The story set-up begins with everything normal, then something comes along which changes things. ‘A fly in the ointment’.

    Here would be an example of a fly in the ointment.
    —–
    A trio of combat veterans who find solace in helping helping individuals leave relationships face a dilemma when the leader decides the help a pair of former high school sweethearts mend their differences instead of helping them split.
    —–
    So the norm would be, the group help couples break up, but the conflict begins when a member goes rogue and tries to help the couple stay together. Now there is tension in the group.

    Everything’s normal — Something happens to break up the norm — problem < Problem < PROBLEM ?— Resolution

    You have only given us the pre-setup, so it is hard to decipher what the story is about.

    Add those few details and you will have a more intriguing logine.

    Hope that helped! Good luck with this!

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  3. Posted: November 17, 2015In: Comedy

    After government-testing a sexual performance pill goes wrong, an easy-pleasing business gigolo is down to his last bath of produced sperm cells. He must not “release” if he eventually wants a family, but his high-perk job may be in danger if he does not.

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    dpg Singularity
    Added an answer on November 19, 2015 at 7:56 am

    There's just one problem with the gigolo's problem --it's not a seemingly insurmountable? dramatic problem. There exists a well-known, bona fide, time-tested and viable solution:? "release" and freeze the sperm? for later impregnation.

    There’s just one problem with the gigolo’s problem –it’s not a seemingly insurmountable? dramatic problem. There exists a well-known, bona fide, time-tested and viable solution:? “release” and freeze the sperm? for later impregnation.

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