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Two Yankees fans’ lives have changed forever when they decide to kidnap their favorite team player.
Sounds fun, probably a gold mine, but you need a WHY/GOAL. Example: A drunken duo pissed that concession prices are too damn high kidnaps their fav player holding him hostage until their ridic ransom demands are met. Take care.
Sounds fun, probably a gold mine, but you need a WHY/GOAL.
Example: A drunken duo pissed that concession prices are too damn high kidnaps their fav player holding him hostage until their ridic ransom demands are met.
Take care.
See less“Armed with nothing but her sex toys, a brash courtesan trapped inside a brothel must fight off her horny client and his creepy friends when she discovers they are actually bloodthirsty vampires.”
Just a little cleanup, take this logline to your friends and fam to get their reaction to the word “courtesan” if you get a lot of head tilts then try different more relatable words. “When trapped inside a brothel full of bloodthirsty vampires, a brash courtesan must fight them off armed only with hRead more
Just a little cleanup, take this logline to your friends and fam to get their reaction to the word “courtesan” if you get a lot of head tilts then try different more relatable words.
“When trapped inside a brothel full of bloodthirsty vampires, a brash courtesan must fight them off armed only with her sex toys.”
To up the ante for these sex toys make her a dominatrix … ouch!
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A closed-off artist tries to leave her old life behind without attachments, when an anonymous one-night stand goes hilariously wrong and the protective wall around the painful memory, isolating her, begins to crack.
Your artist has issues, but I am unable to glean why she’s hurt – thus I cannot fully grasp her psychology. Why was this one-night stand hilarious? It reads like this one-nighter positively impacts her life, but I am unable to connect how this stranger helps her “tear down the wall”. BTW: An artist’Read more
Your artist has issues, but I am unable to glean why she’s hurt – thus I cannot fully grasp her psychology. Why was this one-night stand hilarious? It reads like this one-nighter positively impacts her life, but I am unable to connect how this stranger helps her “tear down the wall”.
BTW: An artist’s medium speaks volumes e.g. While bodypainting a nude model thing’s get hot – you get the idea.
Hope you find this constructive, take care.
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