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  1. Posted: November 19, 2020In: Comedy

    When a Latina student travels to the US to work at a resort during her college’s vacations, she is threatened with salary and staff cuts for the off-season, she must to fight to keep her job and generate extra money to recoup her investment.

    Mike Pedley Singularity
    Added an answer on November 19, 2020 at 8:33 pm

    She's only travelled there for the vacation season, right? So, since she'll be heading back to college in the off-season, why is she threatened with salary cuts and being fired when she's not even going to be there? She doesn't need her job off-season, she'll be in school! What investment? (The bitRead more

    She’s only travelled there for the vacation season, right? So, since she’ll be heading back to college in the off-season, why is she threatened with salary cuts and being fired when she’s not even going to be there? She doesn’t need her job off-season, she’ll be in school!

    What investment? (The bit of text you’ve added below is fundamental to understanding her investment, but you might not have the opportunity to explain that to a reader).

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  2. Posted: November 8, 2020In: Comedy

    A collection of John Hughes inspired films and fake trailers to relive their days in high school.

    GeminiSilverOfficial Penpusher
    Added an answer on November 9, 2020 at 12:27 am

    What's at stake for the filmmakers if they don't get what they want? What is their main objective with making these films and trailers? Who/What are the forces of antagonism standing in their way?

    What’s at stake for the filmmakers if they don’t get what they want?

    What is their main objective with making these films and trailers?

    Who/What are the forces of antagonism standing in their way?

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  3. Posted: March 23, 2017In: Comedy

    before proposing to her, an uber driver has a chance to pick up his girlfriend’s father who is a judge and a young terrorist wants to kill him.

    variable Uberwriter
    Added an answer on November 4, 2020 at 10:49 pm

    The meat is in the chase and it will help to trim the 'before proposing to her' part (maybe say the father of his love interest..). On another note, how will killing the judge help the young terrorist? How is it funny unless the father hates our hero's guts? (just a suggestion) hope this helps :)

    The meat is in the chase and it will help to trim the ‘before proposing to her’ part (maybe say the father of his love interest..). On another note, how will killing the judge help the young terrorist?

    How is it funny unless the father hates our hero’s guts? (just a suggestion)

    hope this helps 🙂

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