1. Posted: September 19, 2019In:

    After being taken hostage following a bank robbery by two bumbling crooks, a fame-obsessed video blogger sees an opportunity to skyrocket her popularity by secretly live-streaming her ordeal with the police hot on their trail.

    Richiev Singularity

    Solid logline, and dpg's follow up is pretty good

    Solid logline, and dpg’s follow up is pretty good

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  2. Posted: November 27, 2018In:

    When a mutated pubic lice epidemic turns people into sex-crazed zombies, a prudish neuroscientist teams up with a loud prostitute to find and spread the cure.

    giannisggeorgiou Samurai

    Thank you all for pointing out the sexist aspect of this premise. I admit I was blind to it and very frivolous about the whole idea.I see that making a prostitute have unprotected sex to spread the lice remedy is a perverse idea. The clich? of her characterisation only makes things worse. So does fiRead more

    Thank you all for pointing out the sexist aspect of this premise. I admit I was blind to it and very frivolous about the whole idea.

    I see that making a prostitute have unprotected sex to spread the lice remedy is a perverse idea. The clich? of her characterisation only makes things worse. So does filing the story under “comedy.”

    Thank you all, again.

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  3. Posted: September 1, 2019In:

    After peeing on a stick, an aging party girl who has it all: the fiance, the house, the job .. and the crippling anxiety ? must decide if she?s ?old enough? to have her baby.

    dpg Singularity

    I like the idea of a woman faced with an inciting incident that forces her to must finally start acting her age.? However, I would like one more clarification.? When you say she's "aging" -- approximately what age do you have in mind?? Mid 30's, on the cusp of 40... or?? I think that needs to be madRead more

    I like the idea of a woman faced with an inciting incident that forces her to must finally start acting her age.? However, I would like one more clarification.? When you say she’s “aging” — approximately what age do you have in mind?? Mid 30’s, on the cusp of 40… or?? I think that needs to be made a little more specific because it seems to be a important story element.

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