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A crazy caveman from a forest tribe accidentally ends up in 18th century London, he must find a way to get back home before he becomes an exhibit at the museum of history.
I'm not good at this because I've just started, but I think first, the "crazy" caveman throws me. What defines a crazy caveman? My next thought is that this sounds like something I have seen before.? I think there needs to be something a little more original to hook me.
I’m not good at this because I’ve just started, but I think first, the “crazy” caveman throws me. What defines a crazy caveman? My next thought is that this sounds like something I have seen before.? I think there needs to be something a little more original to hook me.
See lessIn an anthropomorphic animal world, a Wild Macaque from a Primitive tribe tries to fit into an 18th century aristocratic society in order to rescue her father from a Wealthy Psychotic Rabbit.
What did the Wealthy Psychotic Rabbit do? Did he kidnap the father?
What did the Wealthy Psychotic Rabbit do? Did he kidnap the father?
See lessIn search of the ‘ultimate high’, a gang of high school misfits skip school set on finding an abandoned cannabis crop all while trying to evade a pair of obsessive truant officers.
Very good start.The plot can be a little sharper. If this is "Pineapple Express with teens," then definitely go with the growers or other bigger antags. But if it's "Superbad with pot," meaning it's? about the quest to the location (which they reach in Act III), then the truant officers... seem okayRead more
Very good start.
The plot can be a little sharper. If this is “Pineapple Express with teens,” then definitely go with the growers or other bigger antags. But if it’s “Superbad with pot,” meaning it’s? about the quest to the location (which they reach in Act III), then the truant officers… seem okay. Try to add another sense of the trouble along the way, if it’s a quest. Same with an issue for the protag or co-leads, as in the two movies mentioned and as Mike mentions.
Add a sense of location.
>> In search of the ultimate high
This can be cut and replaced with a description of the crop being a new strain or such. Or they don’t care about the quality, it’s about a huge amount of free weed.
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