1. Posted: June 21, 2020In:

    A lonely and conflicted gay teenager learns to accept himself and take pride in who he is with the help of an unlikely friend who introduces him to the world of boxing

    Rowe Penpusher

    Thank you - loads to work on, lots to think about. The crowd funder goes live mid-July.  The shoot is scheduled for 4 days in September. I shall keep you posted! Rowe   : )

    Thank you – loads to work on, lots to think about.

    The crowd funder goes live mid-July.  The shoot is scheduled for 4 days in September.

    I shall keep you posted!

    Rowe   : )

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  2. Posted: October 11, 2019In:

    When she allows her husband’s overdose, a neglectful young mother must embark on a journey of recovery or risk losing her children to the system forever.

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    HannahB Penpusher

    I would suggest adding urgency or a timeframe for losing her children.? Like a court date or an order from the court.

    I would suggest adding urgency or a timeframe for losing her children.? Like a court date or an order from the court.

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  3. Posted: April 22, 2020In:

    When a terminally ill student wants to commit suicide, he meets an enigmatic girl who gives him new courage to face life, only to find out that her life expectancy is lower than his.

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    CraigDGriffiths Uberwriter

    I was thinking in your story. This is just the thoughts I was having. What about if he wasn?t dying. He was just depressed and suicidal. He wants to die. She is dying but wants to live. He finds a reason to live, but then learns it is going to be taken from him and their is nothing he can do.

    I was thinking in your story.

    This is just the thoughts I was having.

    What about if he wasn?t dying. He was just depressed and suicidal. He wants to die. She is dying but wants to live.

    He finds a reason to live, but then learns it is going to be taken from him and their is nothing he can do.

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