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After being disgracefully fired for cheating from his billion-dollar startup, penniless maverick joins his ex-girlfriend’s bankrupt company to regain his lost glory
The story sounds interesting. It could be a comedy as well. I have a couple of questions: 1. What does the maverick expect from joining a bankrupt company? Does he intend to turn it around? 2. What may prevent him from regaining his lost glory? 3. Why is he penniless? He had a billion dollar startupRead more
The story sounds interesting. It could be a comedy as well. I have a couple of questions:
1. What does the maverick expect from joining a bankrupt company? Does he intend to turn it around?
2. What may prevent him from regaining his lost glory?
3. Why is he penniless? He had a billion dollar startup before he got fired. It’s logical that he’d still have a good amount of money when he was fired unless he was incarcerated and forced to pay a hefty fine for his crime.
In a logline you are clear about the character (the penniless maverick), the inciting incident (he’s fired from his job), and his dramatic need (to regain his lost glory). What’s missing is the conflict/antagonistic force (person) that may prevent him from achieving his goal. Without this element, you don’t have a story.
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Thank you - loads to work on, lots to think about. The crowd funder goes live mid-July. The shoot is scheduled for 4 days in September. I shall keep you posted! Rowe : )
Thank you – loads to work on, lots to think about.
The crowd funder goes live mid-July. The shoot is scheduled for 4 days in September.
I shall keep you posted!
Rowe : )
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I would suggest adding urgency or a timeframe for losing her children.? Like a court date or an order from the court.
I would suggest adding urgency or a timeframe for losing her children.? Like a court date or an order from the court.
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