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After a shy teen falls in love with an unknown girl he dreams of every night, he sleeps all day to be with her, but ultimately he has to overcome his shyness in order to find a real girlfriend.
As OlDustyDogg said.The teen definitely has a socializing issue.? But he's only a teen -- he's got years ahead of him to have girlfriends and eventually find a mate.? Why must he find a girlfriend NOW?? What's the dramatic urgency?? What are the stakes?? What does he stand to gain if he does find aRead more
As OlDustyDogg said.
The teen definitely has a socializing issue.? But he’s only a teen — he’s got years ahead of him to have girlfriends and eventually find a mate.? Why must he find a girlfriend NOW?? What’s the dramatic urgency?? What are the stakes?? What does he stand to gain if he does find a girlfriend NOW?? What does he stand to lose NOW if he doesn’t?
(Having an “unknown girl he dreams of” also has echoes Jung’s notion of the anima archetype.? Which I assume you are familiar with.? But I don’t know what you intend to do with that in the story.? Like how does this “dream girl”, his? anima , present a complication, an obstacle to relating to real women in his waking life?)
See lessAn abused teen is suspected of murdering his bully and has 48 hours to prove his innocence before the police find out he blackmailed the bully.
As Nir says, the time frame is too arbitrary. It might take the police hours, days or weeks to trace online photos back to their source. There are too many factors at play. Furthermore, it is not clear whether the blackmailing crime helps or hurts the teenager. In the normal course of events, the peRead more
As Nir says, the time frame is too arbitrary. It might take the police hours, days or weeks to trace online photos back to their source. There are too many factors at play. Furthermore, it is not clear whether the blackmailing crime helps or hurts the teenager. In the normal course of events, the person being blackmailed would be the suspect in the blackmailer’s murder, not the other way around. After all, if you are successfully blackmailing someone, you would want them to continue paying up. Hence, if the teen were found to have been blackmailing the bully, it might make the police less likely to think he was the murderer.
See lessWhen his big brother goes missing in the wilderness, an anxious high-school senior heads into the wild to find him? accompanied by his brother?s ghost
We could just remove the details of the ghost. When his brother is goes missing in the wild, an over anxious high schooler teams up with a ghost to find him before it's too late.
We could just remove the details of the ghost.
When his brother is goes missing in the wild, an over anxious high schooler teams up with a ghost to find him before it’s too late.
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