1. Posted: March 5, 2020In:

    A teenager must confront the father she put in prison before he wreacks havoc on her life and ruins her first chance at love.

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    deborah_b Logliner

    Thanks again for the insightful comments, team. I am enjoying this logline pinball and will continue to think the concept through ...!

    Thanks again for the insightful comments, team. I am enjoying this logline pinball and will continue to think the concept through …!

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  2. Posted: February 24, 2020In:

    After a bandmate and childhood friend struggles with drug and alcohol addiction, three best friends must fight against losing their recording contract.

    Mike Pedley Singularity

    The goal should be to get their friend sober so they don't risk their recording contract or his life. What's different about this to say "Bohemian Rhapsody"?

    The goal should be to get their friend sober so they don’t risk their recording contract or his life.

    What’s different about this to say “Bohemian Rhapsody”?

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  3. Posted: February 10, 2020In:

    When her husband takes a sabbatical from his family, and her children are placed in therapy, she struggles at parenting.

    dpg Singularity

    The designated genre is "Coming of Age".? This tag? indicates that the narrative will be framed from the pov of one of the children.? That the protagonist will be one of the children.? But the logline is framed from the pov of the wife. So who owns the story?? Who is in the driver's seat of the plotRead more

    The designated genre is “Coming of Age”.? This tag? indicates that the narrative will be framed from the pov of one of the children.? That the protagonist will be one of the children.? But the logline is framed from the pov of the wife.

    So who owns the story?? Who is in the driver’s seat of the plot?? Who is the protagonist?

     

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