1. Posted: February 6, 2020In:

    When his big brother goes missing in the wilderness, an anxious high-school senior heads into the wild to find him? accompanied by his brother?s ghost

    kpetrakis01 Logliner

    We could just remove the details of the ghost.   When his brother is goes missing in the wild, an over anxious high schooler teams up with a ghost to find him before it's too late.

    We could just remove the details of the ghost.

     

    When his brother is goes missing in the wild, an over anxious high schooler teams up with a ghost to find him before it’s too late.

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  2. Posted: March 5, 2020In:

    A teenager must confront the father she put in prison before he wreacks havoc on her life and ruins her first chance at love.

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    deborah_b Logliner

    Thanks again for the insightful comments, team. I am enjoying this logline pinball and will continue to think the concept through ...!

    Thanks again for the insightful comments, team. I am enjoying this logline pinball and will continue to think the concept through …!

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  3. Posted: February 24, 2020In:

    After a bandmate and childhood friend struggles with drug and alcohol addiction, three best friends must fight against losing their recording contract.

    Mike Pedley Singularity

    The goal should be to get their friend sober so they don't risk their recording contract or his life. What's different about this to say "Bohemian Rhapsody"?

    The goal should be to get their friend sober so they don’t risk their recording contract or his life.

    What’s different about this to say “Bohemian Rhapsody”?

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