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  1. Posted: November 10, 2018In: Coming of Age

    In an anthromorpic world, a young lion cub Living in his father shadow, decides to create the world?s first diverse sports team. Determined to prove themselves, these outcasts battle against convention and use their differences as strength in a futuristic sport.

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    Added an answer on June 12, 2019 at 11:46 am

    In an anthropomorphic world, a young lion cub, legally forbidden to play <<sport>>??? ?must create a team of other outcast players to prove to his <<sport>> hero father and the government? that cubs deserve to be included. Just a suggestion to let us know why can't he play noRead more

    In an anthropomorphic world, a young lion cub, legally forbidden to play <<sport>>??? ?must create a team of other outcast players to prove to his <<sport>> hero father and the government? that cubs deserve to be included.

    Just a suggestion to let us know

    why can’t he play now? – incapable, forbidden,

    Why does he create a team of outcasts? – Are all cubs forbidden or anyone non-human?

    Why is he doing it? To fight for his right to play?

     

    Just some ideas.

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  2. Posted: March 20, 2019In: Coming of Age

    Life for a SoCal adolescent upends when his family moves to 1970?s Tehran, addled by homesickness, culture shock and coming of age, the unlikely adoption of an eagle inspires his escape into the ancient art of falconry.

    Robb Ross Samurai
    Added an answer on March 25, 2019 at 8:52 am

    In looking at this again, is it more of a "Pet Love" story? (Dolphin Tale, Free Willy, etc.) If yes, then the eagle does belong in the logline.

    In looking at this again, is it more of a “Pet Love” story? (Dolphin Tale, Free Willy, etc.) If yes, then the eagle does belong in the logline.

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  3. Posted: March 7, 2019In: Coming of Age

    Cursed to forever wander the earth by her ancient ancestors, a jobbing painter must seek a way to repaint the Cistine Chapel to reflect Gnostic Beliefs so that she may finally find eternal rest.

    Robb Ross Samurai
    Added an answer on March 10, 2019 at 11:38 am

    Does she spend most of the time painting? What is the conflict exactly? How does that objective end the curse? How is this coming of age?

    Does she spend most of the time painting?

    What is the conflict exactly?

    How does that objective end the curse?

    How is this coming of age?

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