1. Posted: March 20, 2019In:

    Life for a SoCal adolescent upends when his family moves to 1970?s Tehran, addled by homesickness, culture shock and coming of age, the unlikely adoption of an eagle inspires his escape into the ancient art of falconry.

    Robb Ross Samurai

    In looking at this again, is it more of a "Pet Love" story? (Dolphin Tale, Free Willy, etc.) If yes, then the eagle does belong in the logline.

    In looking at this again, is it more of a “Pet Love” story? (Dolphin Tale, Free Willy, etc.) If yes, then the eagle does belong in the logline.

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  2. Posted: March 7, 2019In:

    Cursed to forever wander the earth by her ancient ancestors, a jobbing painter must seek a way to repaint the Cistine Chapel to reflect Gnostic Beliefs so that she may finally find eternal rest.

    Robb Ross Samurai

    Does she spend most of the time painting? What is the conflict exactly? How does that objective end the curse? How is this coming of age?

    Does she spend most of the time painting?

    What is the conflict exactly?

    How does that objective end the curse?

    How is this coming of age?

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  3. Posted: February 12, 2019In:

    After his best friend dies committing a school shooting, a troubled teen is sent to live with his estranged father and meets a boy who opens him up to new experiences.

    Richiev Singularity

    The story seems to be about the relationship between the troubled teen and his new friend. The rest is backstory, which is good for the script but just takes up space in the logline.What is the lead character's goal? He meets the new friend and then he wants... (What does your lead character want?)

    The story seems to be about the relationship between the troubled teen and his new friend. The rest is backstory, which is good for the script but just takes up space in the logline.

    What is the lead character’s goal? He meets the new friend and then he wants… (What does your lead character want?)

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