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  1. Posted: July 12, 2018In: Coming of Age

    Julia a high school girl, learns that her younger sister has a bowel syndrome disorder and should undergo surgery as soon as possible. She decides to go to Texas with her two friends. But in their road trip, they get involved in some adventures.

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    Jay Cannon (JC) Logliner
    Added an answer on July 13, 2018 at 9:38 am

    Tie the road trip to the need for the surgery.? Expand on "some adventures."

    Tie the road trip to the need for the surgery.? Expand on “some adventures.”

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  2. Posted: July 9, 2018In: Coming of Age

    After a chance meeting with his high school sweetheart reminds him he?s not who he aspired to be, a responsible 29-year-old risks his healthy relationship and stable career to live the life he dreamt of.

    TullyArcher Samurai
    Added an answer on July 11, 2018 at 1:37 am

    For the new one: I dig it more, but it still feels a little conflict-free. My first thought was "why doesn't he just explain to his girlfriend that he'd like to be more adventurous or whatever, and give her a chance to do it WITH him, if it's such a healthy relationship?" My second thought was "whatRead more

    For the new one: I dig it more, but it still feels a little conflict-free. My first thought was “why doesn’t he just explain to his girlfriend that he’d like to be more adventurous or whatever, and give her a chance to do it WITH him, if it’s such a healthy relationship?” My second thought was “what kind of life did he dream of that would end his current healthy relationship? Does he want to be a crime boss? Is she a huge dullard who hates fun?” It seems like the kind of story that would evaporate if anyone simply communicated.

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  3. Posted: June 15, 2018In: Coming of Age

    After hearing about a new ?cancer? that?s targeting people like him, a gay kids reality becomes much scarier than fiction in 1982 small town Indiana. Based on actual events, ten-year-old Billy joins a fundamental Baptist Church to avoid ?God?s Punishment? and try to pray away the feelings for his fourth grade crush but, instead, finds himself fighting for his young life which lies the hands of a church, community, and family that doesn?t want him to exist.

    CraigDGriffiths Uberwriter
    Added an answer on June 18, 2018 at 7:53 am

    As a TV logline The ongoing struggles of a young gay man who joins a church to escape AIDS but is faced with bigotry and hatred which he is asked to support.

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    The ongoing struggles of a young gay man who joins a church to escape AIDS but is faced with bigotry and hatred which he is asked to support.

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