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How is it the student just realized something that happened 50 years ago?? Who helped the student realize his mistake?
How is it the student just realized something that happened 50 years ago?? Who helped the student realize his mistake?
See lessJulia a high school girl, learns that her younger sister has a bowel syndrome disorder and should undergo surgery as soon as possible. She decides to go to Texas with her two friends. But in their road trip, they get involved in some adventures.
Tie the road trip to the need for the surgery.? Expand on "some adventures."
Tie the road trip to the need for the surgery.? Expand on “some adventures.”
See lessAfter a chance meeting with his high school sweetheart reminds him he?s not who he aspired to be, a responsible 29-year-old risks his healthy relationship and stable career to live the life he dreamt of.
For the new one: I dig it more, but it still feels a little conflict-free. My first thought was "why doesn't he just explain to his girlfriend that he'd like to be more adventurous or whatever, and give her a chance to do it WITH him, if it's such a healthy relationship?" My second thought was "whatRead more
For the new one: I dig it more, but it still feels a little conflict-free. My first thought was “why doesn’t he just explain to his girlfriend that he’d like to be more adventurous or whatever, and give her a chance to do it WITH him, if it’s such a healthy relationship?” My second thought was “what kind of life did he dream of that would end his current healthy relationship? Does he want to be a crime boss? Is she a huge dullard who hates fun?” It seems like the kind of story that would evaporate if anyone simply communicated.
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