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  1. Posted: June 15, 2018In: Coming of Age

    After hearing about a new ?cancer? that?s targeting people like him, a gay kids reality becomes much scarier than fiction in 1982 small town Indiana. Based on actual events, ten-year-old Billy joins a fundamental Baptist Church to avoid ?God?s Punishment? and try to pray away the feelings for his fourth grade crush but, instead, finds himself fighting for his young life which lies the hands of a church, community, and family that doesn?t want him to exist.

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    Added an answer on June 18, 2018 at 7:53 am

    As a TV logline The ongoing struggles of a young gay man who joins a church to escape AIDS but is faced with bigotry and hatred which he is asked to support.

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    The ongoing struggles of a young gay man who joins a church to escape AIDS but is faced with bigotry and hatred which he is asked to support.

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  2. Posted: May 26, 2018In: Coming of Age

    After a man discovers his wife has been cheating for years, he re-connects with the first girl he ever fell in love with to remind himself who he used to be.

    dpg Singularity
    Added an answer on May 28, 2018 at 2:48 am

    LucindaFarnsworth: I like the premise.? Although it's definitely not a coming of age story.? (The genre label you use to label your story is critical in marketing your script. ) I suggest a version with an ironic twist: After his wife dumps him, a man returns to his home town to win back the heart oRead more

    LucindaFarnsworth:

    I like the premise.? Although it’s definitely not a coming of age story.? (The genre label you use to label your story is critical in marketing your script. )

    I suggest a version with an ironic twist:

    After his wife dumps him, a man returns to his home town to win back the heart of the girl he dumped for his wife.
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  3. Posted: April 18, 2018In: Coming of Age

    shipped to grandpa’s village for vacation, a city brat must find how to enjoy his summer

    dpg Singularity
    Added an answer on April 18, 2018 at 10:00 pm

    I really like Richiev's version.? And I suggest pushing the concept further.What if? his? grandfather is an un-beloved, ornery,? old goat who lives miles from town on a small cattle ranch? in the West?? And he lives totally off the grid -- no electricity, no phone, no wireless coverage?Th kid is senRead more

    I really like Richiev’s version.? And I suggest pushing the concept further.

    What if? his? grandfather is an un-beloved, ornery,? old goat who lives miles from town on a small cattle ranch? in the West?? And he lives totally off the grid — no electricity, no phone, no wireless coverage?

    Th kid is sent there for the summer not only? to “cure”? his online addiction? but also to work for his grandfather whose health is declining.? So? the kid? has to to help him by herding cattle,? harvesting hay, building fences, riding horses, etc.? About all of which he is clueless.

    This is a summer with? less than a zero possibility of fun.? Living off the grid is his version of hell.

    Whatever.? My point is, put the urban savvy kid in a situation where in every possible way, he is a fish out of water.? Compelled against his will to? live with a person whom he initially thinks is the last person in the world — in the galaxy, in the universe –he could possibly bond with.

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