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Amid a sweltering summer, five different souls first encounter adulthood as gentrification alters their community.
>>>she?s a free spirit who remains a beacon of ?motivation? for my protagonistWhatever, it's your story.? But it's not a star-crossed story unless it seems fated to fail because they come from opposites sides of the track, economically and socially (as in "Romeo & Juliet).? Or fall in lRead more
>>>she?s a free spirit who remains a beacon of ?motivation? for my protagonist
Whatever, it’s your story.? But it’s not a star-crossed story unless it seems fated to fail because they come from opposites sides of the track, economically and socially (as in “Romeo & Juliet).? Or fall in love despite having clashing personality temperaments and opposing interests and beliefs about the central issue.? If he’s inspired by her, it should be because he wants to prove her wrong, convert her to his point of view. As she wants to prove him wrong, convert him to his point of view.?
The best love stories are also arguments over the terms of endearment.
fwiw
See lessA sassy young city girl struggles to heal a rift between her mother and estranged grandfather by collecting seaglass for his latest art project.
>>>Really low stakes, I know :^)I beg to differ.? If you look closely, I think you'll see that in most movies, the protagonist can only achieve her objective goal by first building a new relationship based on mutual love and respect with a love interest or ally.? Or repair an old one that wRead more
>>>Really low stakes, I know :^)
I beg to differ.? If you look closely, I think you’ll see that in most movies, the protagonist can only achieve her objective goal by first building a new relationship based on mutual love and respect with a love interest or ally.? Or repair an old one that was destroyed by misunderstanding and selfishness.
Within the context of her family,? her situation, building an emotional bridge to her grandfather is everything.? After all, she doesn’t have a father around, right?? And she’s not getting along with her mother, right?? The grandfather is her only hope of finding a grownup who will provide her with the kind of adult love and attention she desperately needs (whether she realizes it or not).
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It's a great concept. I think it's got potential. Now you just need to make it entertaining. You need to add explosion to that story. Maybe instead of less controversial you could make it more controversial. Make it a comedy; Make the location a small town in Alabama. Make her black and Muslim; AddRead more
It’s a great concept. I think it’s got potential. Now you just need to make it entertaining. You need to add explosion to that story. Maybe instead of less controversial you could make it more controversial. Make it a comedy; Make the location a small town in Alabama. Make her black and Muslim; Add irony and risky stakes. Maybe she goes dressed to the nines and pees standing up while singing opera. Or maybe even a horror story. Or a thriller. Give her inhuman strength and make her go into men toilets and rape everyone in sight, then disappear. She could end up being an evil entity or an alien. Make the hero a baffled detective. It could appeal to both sides of the political spectrum like that. Why should we sit down and watch it?
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