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When a foster care teen learns of his biological father’s death, he must undergo a mystic rite of passage to claim his inheritance. (23)
>>The evil dwarf-like creature appears and begins to torment the boy. As this character has appeared in severalof your loglines, I venture to surmise that you're looking for a plot vehicle in which to ?cast an evil dwarf. ?Why? What makes this character so dramatically interesting to you?
>>The evil dwarf-like creature appears and begins to torment the boy.
As this character has appeared in severalof your loglines, I venture to surmise that you’re looking for a plot vehicle in which to ?cast an evil dwarf. ?Why? What makes this character so dramatically interesting to you?
See lessWhen a commune agrees to full coverage in a TV program, the group’s newest member, on the lam from media attacks that led to a family murder, devices a plan to sabotage the TV’s plan to protect his identity.
Robert, Your logline presents a setup for a plot. It needs to illustrate a main character, an inciting incident, and what must be done before something happens to change an outcome forever. I suggest that you check out the formula advice linked to this page. Good luck.
Robert,
Your logline presents a setup for a plot. It needs to illustrate a main character, an inciting incident, and what must be done before something happens to change an outcome forever.
I suggest that you check out the formula advice linked to this page.
Good luck.
See lessA disavowed scoutmaster visits a friend in Lebanon, and ends up leading a fledgling group of boys on a mission to save ancient relics from advancing terrorists.
Agreed with DPG. I'll add that there seems to be no cause and effect between the events. Why does him visitng a friend motivate him to save relics? This connection is not clear.
Agreed with DPG.
I’ll add that there seems to be no cause and effect between the events. Why does him visitng a friend motivate him to save relics? This connection is not clear.
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