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When a commune agrees to full coverage in a TV program, the group’s newest member, on the lam from media attacks that led to a family murder, devices a plan to sabotage the TV’s plan to protect his identity.
Robert, Your logline presents a setup for a plot. It needs to illustrate a main character, an inciting incident, and what must be done before something happens to change an outcome forever. I suggest that you check out the formula advice linked to this page. Good luck.
Robert,
Your logline presents a setup for a plot. It needs to illustrate a main character, an inciting incident, and what must be done before something happens to change an outcome forever.
I suggest that you check out the formula advice linked to this page.
Good luck.
See lessA disavowed scoutmaster visits a friend in Lebanon, and ends up leading a fledgling group of boys on a mission to save ancient relics from advancing terrorists.
Agreed with DPG. I'll add that there seems to be no cause and effect between the events. Why does him visitng a friend motivate him to save relics? This connection is not clear.
Agreed with DPG.
I’ll add that there seems to be no cause and effect between the events. Why does him visitng a friend motivate him to save relics? This connection is not clear.
See lessAfter a near drowning makes him the target of an evil spirit, an avoidant teenager must endure hellish heat when a bushfire threatens to destroy his hideout. (27)
I'm quite familiar with the rite of passage scenario. ?I've studied it in anthropology and in drama. And I fail to see how the torment inflicted by the evil spirit constitutes a rite of passage for this teenager.What necessary change is he resisting?Where (finally and positively) is his passage goinRead more
I’m quite familiar with the rite of passage scenario. ?I’ve studied it in anthropology and in drama. And I fail to see how the torment inflicted by the evil spirit constitutes a rite of passage for this teenager.
What necessary change is he resisting?
Where (finally and positively) is his passage going to take him? ?From what to what?
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