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  1. Posted: July 25, 2017In: Coming of Age

    After a near drowning makes him the target of an evil spirit, an avoidant teenager must endure hellish heat when a bushfire threatens to destroy his hideout. (27)

    dpg Singularity
    Added an answer on July 27, 2017 at 12:20 am

    I'm quite familiar with the rite of passage scenario. ?I've studied it in anthropology and in drama. And I fail to see how the torment inflicted by the evil spirit constitutes a rite of passage for this teenager.What necessary change is he resisting?Where (finally and positively) is his passage goinRead more

    I’m quite familiar with the rite of passage scenario. ?I’ve studied it in anthropology and in drama. And I fail to see how the torment inflicted by the evil spirit constitutes a rite of passage for this teenager.

    What necessary change is he resisting?

    Where (finally and positively) is his passage going to take him? ?From what to what?

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  2. Posted: July 15, 2017In: Coming of Age

    When a young teenage boy living in a racist Texan town discovers and befriends a Mexican teenage slave, he must expose the secret slave-trading business to save his friend and the others.

    Dkpough1 Uberwriter
    Added an answer on July 17, 2017 at 9:35 pm

    Slavery was legally abolished, but that doesn't mean it doesn't still exist in the U.S. There are still illegal slave trades. And, just like a gang, If they haven't been caught yet, then that must mean they're smart enough to not be able to be caught by someone just calling the police. Other they liRead more

    Slavery was legally abolished, but that doesn’t mean it doesn’t still exist in the U.S. There are still illegal slave trades. And, just like a gang, If they haven’t been caught yet, then that must mean they’re smart enough to not be able to be caught by someone just calling the police. Other they likely would’ve been stopped by now. I think modern day slavery is a topic worthy of a film and the discussion it could bring.?

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  3. Posted: July 15, 2017In: Coming of Age

    UPDATED: When a teenage boy living in modern-day Texas befriends a teenage Mexican slave, he must expose a secret slave-trading business to save his friend.

    Neer Shelter Singularity
    Added an answer on July 15, 2017 at 11:46 am

    I just read your previous post about the same concept. In future, please restrict your revisions to the same thread of the original logline, you'll be able to track the logline/concept's evolution more easily this way.

    I just read your previous post about the same concept.

    In future, please restrict your revisions to the same thread of the original logline, you’ll be able to track the logline/concept’s evolution more easily this way.

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