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  1. Posted: May 18, 2022In: Coming of Age

    An introverted young man is hesitant to take part in Faroe Islands’ biggest party day, Òlavsøka, until two free spirits take him under their wing for a social adventure.

    BenGilani Logliner
    Added an answer on July 11, 2022 at 3:28 pm

    Hi Tjmohr, How about something like this? Hesitant to participate in social adventures, an introverted young man is encouraged by two free spirits to attend an island's mega party. I hope this helps.

    Hi Tjmohr,
    How about something like this?

    Hesitant to participate in social adventures, an introverted young man is encouraged by two free spirits to attend an island’s mega party.

    I hope this helps.

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  2. Posted: April 5, 2022In: Coming of Age

    After his workaholic mom is send to work at their native island, Alex (11) will live his first summer at the gransparents village.

    Richiev Singularity
    Added an answer on April 6, 2022 at 4:01 pm

    The word 'His' seems to come out of nowhere, I get the gist of what you are saying in the logline but it is still written in a slightly confusing way. When her workaholic mom... (So we are talking about a girl young enough to still be living with her mom) His son Alex (11) (This is the part that conRead more

    The word ‘His’ seems to come out of nowhere, I get the gist of what you are saying in the logline but it is still written in a slightly confusing way.

    When her workaholic mom… (So we are talking about a girl young enough to still be living with her mom)

    His son Alex (11) (This is the part that confuses me, who is the ‘His’ that has a son?)

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  3. Posted: January 6, 2022In: Coming of Age

    A Latin American immigrant teen who is also of Chinese descent lives his “Wonder Years” trying to fit in a half black, half white small Missisippi town in the 1980s.

    Odie Samurai
    Added an answer on January 11, 2022 at 8:53 am

    This is what I’m able to glean: “Set in a 1980s Mississippi town, a mixed-race Latino teen must overcome racism in order to [GOAL]” OR “… overcome prejudice against immigrants …” OR Show “Wonder Years” e.g., “… racism when falling for the mayor’s daughter” Hope you find this constructive, make thisRead more

    This is what I’m able to glean:
    “Set in a 1980s Mississippi town, a mixed-race Latino teen must overcome racism in order to [GOAL]”
    OR
    “… overcome prejudice against immigrants …”
    OR
    Show “Wonder Years” e.g., “… racism when falling for the mayor’s daughter”

    Hope you find this constructive, make this yours – keep going!

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