1. Posted: May 9, 2022In:

    – With life beyond high school approaching, three best friends find themselves in an unexpected love triangle as the summer winds down.

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    Hi yoobui2, How about something like this as a template? Preparing for the adult life ahead of them, three high school graduates must deal with an unanticipated love triangle before summer winds up. I hope this helps

    Hi yoobui2,
    How about something like this as a template?

    Preparing for the adult life ahead of them, three high school graduates must deal with an unanticipated love triangle before summer winds up.

    I hope this helps

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  2. Posted: May 18, 2022In:

    An introverted young man is hesitant to take part in Faroe Islands’ biggest party day, Òlavsøka, until two free spirits take him under their wing for a social adventure.

    BenGilani Logliner

    Hi Tjmohr, How about something like this? Hesitant to participate in social adventures, an introverted young man is encouraged by two free spirits to attend an island's mega party. I hope this helps.

    Hi Tjmohr,
    How about something like this?

    Hesitant to participate in social adventures, an introverted young man is encouraged by two free spirits to attend an island’s mega party.

    I hope this helps.

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  3. Posted: April 5, 2022In:

    After his workaholic mom is send to work at their native island, Alex (11) will live his first summer at the gransparents village.

    Richiev Singularity

    The word 'His' seems to come out of nowhere, I get the gist of what you are saying in the logline but it is still written in a slightly confusing way. When her workaholic mom... (So we are talking about a girl young enough to still be living with her mom) His son Alex (11) (This is the part that conRead more

    The word ‘His’ seems to come out of nowhere, I get the gist of what you are saying in the logline but it is still written in a slightly confusing way.

    When her workaholic mom… (So we are talking about a girl young enough to still be living with her mom)

    His son Alex (11) (This is the part that confuses me, who is the ‘His’ that has a son?)

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