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A woman seeks vengeance against two men who made her life a living hell, her husband and a corrupt lawyer, but after she sets them up to kill on another, she struggles to prove her innocence when the police discover she had reason to kill them.
Hmm. This feels a bit long. Compelling but a bit too many words to get the point across. Could you start it with "When a *adj* woman orchestrates her husband and lawyer to kill each other, one cop connects the dots and she has to stay one step ahead of him."
Hmm. This feels a bit long. Compelling but a bit too many words to get the point across. Could you start it with “When a *adj* woman orchestrates her husband and lawyer to kill each other, one cop connects the dots and she has to stay one step ahead of him.”
See lessA disgraced ex-cop, offered the chance to regain custody of his son must partner with a soon to retire ex-prosecutor to catch a serial killer before he kills more children, digging for the truth they unearth a hidden layer of personal and professional secrets of those involved from within and outside the law.
I like this logline a lot but seems it has several plots and not sure which one is the main one. Let's try simplifying it. A disgraced ex-cop [CHARACTTER], offered the chance to regain custody of his son must [ACTION/GOAL] partner with a soon to retire ex-prosecutor [CHARACTTER] to catch a serial kiRead more
I like this logline a lot but seems it has several plots and not sure which one is the main one. Let’s try simplifying it.
A disgraced ex-cop [CHARACTTER], offered the chance to regain custody of his son must [ACTION/GOAL] partner with a soon to retire ex-prosecutor [CHARACTTER] to catch a serial killer before he kills more children [ACTION/GOAL], digging for the truth they unearth a hidden layer of personal and professional secrets of those involved from within and outside the law [ACTION/GOAL].
Maybe something like
“A strait-laced prosecutor has to partner up with the disgraced ex-cop who he got fired in order to save his kidnapped son from a serial killer.”
See lessA small-town news anchor accidentally uncovers a deadly bombshell secret on live TV, forcing her to find the truth that will save the town.
Consider the following: What is the deadly bombshell she’s reporting on? This will shed light on her truth/hero’s journey to save her beloved town. The rule of “Show, don’t tell” applies here, as I cannot envision what your “secret” will look like on-screen. FYI: this gives me an Erin Brockovich vibRead more
Consider the following:
What is the deadly bombshell she’s reporting on? This will shed light on her truth/hero’s journey to save her beloved town. The rule of “Show, don’t tell” applies here, as I cannot envision what your “secret” will look like on-screen.
FYI: this gives me an Erin Brockovich vibe, I’m probably way off, but this will give you an idea of what a reader may deduce from your current logline.
Hope you find this constructive, keep going!
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