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  1. Posted: June 12, 2021In: Crime

    After the lawyer’s aide is torture and kill by the 20 policemen—he sues them, and must uncover their leader who order the hit in the underworld of police corrupt bureau.

    Mike Pedley Singularity
    Added an answer on June 12, 2021 at 10:26 pm

    Why does he need to sue them? They just killed a man - if he's got the evidence to sue them, then there's evidence that will convict them of murder. Why was the lawyer's aide killed in the first place? You said it was a hit... but why? What sets this story apart from every other police corruption fiRead more

    Why does he need to sue them? They just killed a man – if he’s got the evidence to sue them, then there’s evidence that will convict them of murder.

    Why was the lawyer’s aide killed in the first place? You said it was a hit… but why?

    What sets this story apart from every other police corruption film? L.A. Confidential springs to mind instantly.

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  2. Posted: April 8, 2021In: Crime

    A young ex-offender wearing a GPS ankle monitor finds himself on the run from the criminal gang he betrayed and must make it home across the city before his 10pm curfew or risk being recalled to prison.

    Odie Samurai
    Added an answer on April 8, 2021 at 2:21 am

    Dig it! Maybe I need more coffee but when reading “ankle monitor” I immediately jumped to - house arrest. Which made me do a double-take to read he was on the run in the city. Leaning towards: “An ankle monitored nark has three hours make it home before his 10 o’clock curfew when discovered by the iRead more

    Dig it!
    Maybe I need more coffee but when reading “ankle monitor” I immediately jumped to – house arrest. Which made me do a double-take to read he was on the run in the city.

    Leaning towards:
    “An ankle monitored nark has three hours make it home before his 10 o’clock curfew when discovered by the inner-city gang he betrayed.”

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  3. Posted: December 21, 2020In: Crime

    When the leader of the Assassination Cartel’s grandson is killed during a raid authorized by the American President, the semi-retired leader invokes an ancient vengeance that will wipe out the president’s seed from the earth

    Richiev Singularity
    Added an answer on December 21, 2020 at 7:57 pm

    It is always best to write the logline from the perspective of the lead character... When his grandson is killed during a raid authorized by the American President, the leader of the Assassination Cartel... (They tell us what his plan is)

    It is always best to write the logline from the perspective of the lead character…

    When his grandson is killed during a raid authorized by the American President, the leader of the Assassination Cartel… (They tell us what his plan is)

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