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  1. Posted: June 24, 2021In: Crime

    After stealing money from what he believes is a small time gang, a former criminal (never caught) finds himself and his girlfriend being pursued by the men he stole from. With nowhere left to go, our protagonist is forced into working with the police to help track down what turns out to be a deadly criminal organization.

    Mike Pedley Singularity
    Added an answer on June 24, 2021 at 10:58 pm

    Why is he stealing money from a gang? What makes him better than the people he's stealing from and therefore makes us root for him? "A man" - that's all you have to say about the hero of your story!? This is the character on whom the weight of the entire plot rests; he has the burden of being the emRead more

    Why is he stealing money from a gang? What makes him better than the people he’s stealing from and therefore makes us root for him?

    “A man” – that’s all you have to say about the hero of your story!? This is the character on whom the weight of the entire plot rests; he has the burden of being the emotional core of the story, and the being who you are expecting an audience to follow to hell and back and will to succeed at every turn… and he’s just “a man”. Your hero deserves better!

    What will happen if he’s caught? Why do we care?

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  2. Posted: June 12, 2021In: Crime

    After the lawyer’s aide is torture and kill by the 20 policemen—he sues them, and must uncover their leader who order the hit in the underworld of police corrupt bureau.

    Mike Pedley Singularity
    Added an answer on June 12, 2021 at 10:26 pm

    Why does he need to sue them? They just killed a man - if he's got the evidence to sue them, then there's evidence that will convict them of murder. Why was the lawyer's aide killed in the first place? You said it was a hit... but why? What sets this story apart from every other police corruption fiRead more

    Why does he need to sue them? They just killed a man – if he’s got the evidence to sue them, then there’s evidence that will convict them of murder.

    Why was the lawyer’s aide killed in the first place? You said it was a hit… but why?

    What sets this story apart from every other police corruption film? L.A. Confidential springs to mind instantly.

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  3. Posted: April 8, 2021In: Crime

    A young ex-offender wearing a GPS ankle monitor finds himself on the run from the criminal gang he betrayed and must make it home across the city before his 10pm curfew or risk being recalled to prison.

    Odie Samurai
    Added an answer on April 8, 2021 at 2:21 am

    Dig it! Maybe I need more coffee but when reading “ankle monitor” I immediately jumped to - house arrest. Which made me do a double-take to read he was on the run in the city. Leaning towards: “An ankle monitored nark has three hours make it home before his 10 o’clock curfew when discovered by the iRead more

    Dig it!
    Maybe I need more coffee but when reading “ankle monitor” I immediately jumped to – house arrest. Which made me do a double-take to read he was on the run in the city.

    Leaning towards:
    “An ankle monitored nark has three hours make it home before his 10 o’clock curfew when discovered by the inner-city gang he betrayed.”

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