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A radio host finds herself caught between a mob boss, her boyfriend, a prostitute, drug lord and a CIA agent through a drug deal gone wrong.
I revised it.
I revised it.
See lessA desolate fugitive is forced out of hiding when his vengeful ex-partner in crime kidnaps his son.
'Desolate', as an adjective applied to a person means they are 'wretched or greatly unhappy'. Why is the hero so unhappy before his son is kidnapped? Considering he is in hiding, did you mean 'reclusive'? In general, the story you describe is too generic. I feel like I've seen this movie a million tRead more
‘Desolate’, as an adjective applied to a person means they are ‘wretched or greatly unhappy’. Why is the hero so unhappy before his son is kidnapped? Considering he is in hiding, did you mean ‘reclusive’?
In general, the story you describe is too generic. I feel like I’ve seen this movie a million times in one form or another.
Try and spice it up by suggesting a greater struggle for the hero, e.g. he’s a successful fugitive living in Mexico and must cross back across the border and risk being caught by the FBI in order to rescue his son from his vengeful ex-partner in crime.
See lessWhen a machete-wielding crew chases a young gang member, he?s forced to drive incognito with a Hassidic geriatric to complete a drug run.
Hassidic?Okay,? so why not also make the kid Jewish? Non-observant. (Or at least 1/2 Jewish. )Or if you really want to get the Hassidic's knickers in a wad,, have the kid's father be an Aborigine. Oy vey!Anyway, have the Hassidic scholar rebuke him for the path his life is going down.? Have an honesRead more
Hassidic?
Okay,? so why not also make the kid Jewish? Non-observant. (Or at least 1/2 Jewish. )
Or if you really want to get the Hassidic’s knickers in a wad,, have the kid’s father be an Aborigine. Oy vey!
Anyway, have the Hassidic scholar rebuke him for the path his life is going down.? Have an honest-to-Elohim conflict of age, culture race,, ethics, the Torah and the Talmud.
If you’re going to throw two people in the same car for the duration of a long ride, give them something to argue about.
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