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A girl was murdered and the investigator and her friends are trying to find the murderer but their hidden secrets stand in their way from finding the truth
How about: When the body of a girl turns up [in some unique and specific way/place], her friends must put aside their differences/resolve old conflicts/confront hidden truths to get to the bottom of murder before someone else is murdered/something else terrible happens. You could also add a midpointRead more
How about:
When the body of a girl turns up [in some unique and specific way/place], her friends must put aside their differences/resolve old conflicts/confront hidden truths to get to the bottom of murder before someone else is murdered/something else terrible happens.
You could also add a midpoint reversal:
When the body of a girl turns up [in some unique and specific way/place], her friends turn on each other; but when a second body is found, they must put aside their differences/resolve old conflicts/confront hidden truths to uncover the murderer.
Love a good crime story!
See lessA girl was murdered and the investigator and her friends are trying to find the murderer and they are hampered by what they have avoided every summer But it has already begun
I'm a little confused and that's never a good place to start with a logline. Why are the investigator's friends getting involved? Surely that's, at the very minimum, against regulations. Or is it the murdered girl's friends??What are they hampered by that they have avoided every summer? Is this relaRead more
I’m a little confused and that’s never a good place to start with a logline.
Why are the investigator’s friends getting involved? Surely that’s, at the very minimum, against regulations. Or is it the murdered girl’s friends??What are they hampered by that they have avoided every summer? Is this relating to the friends? The investigator? Or all of them? What has already begun?
A logline is designed to give a reader a complete summary of the story in under 35 words (ideally). It should cover the inciting incident, the main character (and a characteristic – preferably something that gives us a clue as to who they are), their goal, the stakes (preferably), a ticking clock (optional), and the antagonistic forces working against them.
They shouldn’t be left with questions or left to make assumptions about what’s actually going on. A producer will never look any further if they simply don’t understand the story.
Check out the ‘Our formula’ tab to help with formatting and try to break your story down to its essential components.
Hope this helps.
See lessBegore the summer vacation a girl was murdered After being inherited and the investigator and her friends are trying to find the murderer and they are hampered by what they have avoided every summer But it has already begun
In the summer vacation friends surprise that their Normal life has ruined and what they avoided every summer has already begun after murdering their friend by unknown and they and the investigator are trying to know the killer. I can't edit it is that okay?
In the summer vacation friends surprise that their Normal life has ruined and what they avoided every summer has already begun after murdering their friend by unknown and they and the investigator are trying to know the killer.
I can’t edit it is that okay?
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