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Begore the summer vacation a girl was murdered After being inherited and the investigator and her friends are trying to find the murderer and they are hampered by what they have avoided every summer But it has already begun
In the summer vacation friends surprise that their Normal life has ruined and what they avoided every summer has already begun after murdering their friend by unknown and they and the investigator are trying to know the killer. I can't edit it is that okay?
In the summer vacation friends surprise that their Normal life has ruined and what they avoided every summer has already begun after murdering their friend by unknown and they and the investigator are trying to know the killer.
I can’t edit it is that okay?
See lessDuring the preparation for the summer vacation, a girl “noha” was killed in mysterious circumstances and the investigator”soliman” and her friends are trying to discover the identity of the murder
The phrase "During the preparation for the summer vacation" does not tell us much and seems irrelevant to what follows. Drop the placeholders "noha" and "soliman" as loglines should not contain names. "killed in mysterious circumstances" -> murdered "discover the identity of the murder" -> finRead more
The phrase “During the preparation for the summer vacation” does not tell us much and seems irrelevant to what follows.
Drop the placeholders “noha” and “soliman” as loglines should not contain names.
“killed in mysterious circumstances” -> murdered
“discover the identity of the murder” -> find the murderer
What we learned then: a girl was murdered and an investigator and her friends are trying to find the murderer.
This is a generic plot. What is different in your story from all the other murder mysteries? Be specific.
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Perfect logline I like it but make it a little bit shorter
Perfect logline I like it but make it a little bit shorter
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