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After receiving a personality implant to find a nuclear weapon, the officer starts noticing malfunctions of a previous personality that makes it harder for him to complete his mission.
This is very confusing. What is a personality implant? How will a different personality help him find a nuke? Why does he need to find the bomb? Was it stolen? Does an enemy of the state have it? All this good stuff, needs to either come through or be insinuated by the logline.
This is very confusing.
What is a personality implant? How will a different personality help him find a nuke? Why does he need to find the bomb? Was it stolen? Does an enemy of the state have it?
All this good stuff, needs to either come through or be insinuated by the logline.
See lessIn 1977, a reformed ex-con, desperate to pay for his mother?s hospital bill, returns to his old life of drug dealing but soon learns the game has changed and the players are more ruthless than before.
the darkhorse: >>>>you could sell a bad screenplay as long as it has that one great idea/hook/bait, etc You raise an important point.? I've heard stories to that effect.? But here's the catch.? They buy the script for the hook -- but they don't like the execution.? So they pay someone elRead more
the darkhorse:
>>>>you could sell a bad screenplay as long as it has that one great idea/hook/bait, etc
You raise an important point.? I’ve heard stories to that effect.? But here’s the catch.? They buy the script for the hook — but they don’t like the execution.? So they pay someone else to do a rewrite.? Which means that you, the original writer, lose total control of your script, get paid less, and have to share credit.
See lessFresh from prison, a former drug dealer, struggling to rebuild his life and reconcile with an old flame becomes entangled in a world of duplicitous old friends and younger and more ruthless thugs when he agrees to help his best friend, a junkie war veteran, pay back a murderous mob boss, during the tumultuous, racially-divided week of the N.Y. Blackout of ?77.
Thanks for the feedback, everyone. I've started rewriting the script for this one too. Okay. I'll see what I can do...
Thanks for the feedback, everyone. I’ve started rewriting the script for this one too. Okay. I’ll see what I can do…
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