1. Posted: April 19, 2019In:

    A former drug-dealer, fresh from prison, must help his best friend, an unstable war veteran, pay back a murderous mob boss, during the week of the N.Y. Blackout of ?77.

    thedarkhorse Samurai

    Thanks for the feedback, everyone.

    Thanks for the feedback, everyone.

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  2. Posted: April 13, 2019In:

    In 1977, a reformed ex-con must return to New York City?s violent underworld in order to save his childhood best friend from a dangerous gangster.

    Robb Ross Samurai

    Yup, and clarify how they plan to make the money. The implication is by selling drugs, though that?s likely not a protag I?d care about. Is $10k in a week enough a challenge?

    Yup, and clarify how they plan to make the money. The implication is by selling drugs, though that?s likely not a protag I?d care about.

    Is $10k in a week enough a challenge?

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  3. Posted: March 24, 2019In:

    When a killer threatens the streets of Austin, a Texas Blues loving police detective with a photographic memory, and her charismatic, gay partner are forced to form an unlikely, and tempestuous alliance with former professional athlete both detectives suspect of murder.

    dpg Singularity

    >>>>included the partner in the logline.Okay.? That can make sense for a series.Have you thought about making her lesbian and him straight? I mean, if you're going to play the sexual orientation card...And does it need to be set in? liberal, glamorous Austin?? Could it be set in a city oRead more

    >>>>included the partner in the logline.

    Okay.? That can make sense for a series.

    Have you thought about making her lesbian and him straight? I mean, if you’re going to play the sexual orientation card…

    And does it need to be set in? liberal, glamorous Austin?? Could it be set in a city or large town in arid vastness of West Texas or the high plains of the Panhandle or the piney woods of East Texas — somewhere her (or his) sexual orientation would come into conflict with more conservative social values? Austin may have the glitz and glamour, but in my sojourns through the Lonely Star State I found more interesting people and situations outside the urban fleshpots of Austin, Houston? and Dallas-Ft Worth.

    Just a thought.

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