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In a world of magic and poker a player meets a friend of his dead father and..... This is how a logline works. The quickest way through a story
In a world of magic and poker a player meets a friend of his dead father and…..
This is how a logline works.
The quickest way through a story
See lessThis is my logline for a short from spanish to english
Transport as in drive the body from the hospital or morgue to a funeral home? Or, transport as in an illegal activity of some sort?? If the former then I'm not sure what the story is - transport the body job done. If the latter, why would he agree to do the job? And why would the audience care aboutRead more
Transport as in drive the body from the hospital or morgue to a funeral home? Or, transport as in an illegal activity of some sort?? If the former then I’m not sure what the story is – transport the body job done. If the latter, why would he agree to do the job? And why would the audience care about a character who agreed to work for such horrible people?
Other than that, I would say the concept needs an event to compel the main character to need to take the job – other wise, it’s not clear why he MUST do what he does.
See lessA teen mom is almost old enough to leave home, but her gypsy family criminal ways will make her the victim instead.
Instead of what? Victim of what? Almost old enough is rather vague; why can't she leave now? How is "gypsy criminal" not racist? It sounds racist. And it isn't clear what the story is, or the conflict. Give us the basics, be specific, avoid commas.
Instead of what? Victim of what? Almost old enough is rather vague; why can’t she leave now? How is “gypsy criminal” not racist? It sounds racist. And it isn’t clear what the story is, or the conflict. Give us the basics, be specific, avoid commas.
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