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  1. Posted: November 21, 2018In: Crime

    With dreams to box at the 2000 Sydney Olympics and provide for his family, a young man is offered a more profitable career by a charismatic crime figure clashing with his values, beliefs and kind-hearted nature.

    dpg Singularity
    Added an answer on November 21, 2018 at 11:41 pm

    Richiev's version is a version of the "Rocky scenario".? Rocky? Balboa pursued his dream of boxing by night.? His day job was to collect money for a local loan shark mobster. Further, my understanding is that Caleb's intention is to develop a character arc? from relative innocence to morally corruptRead more

    Richiev’s version is a version of the “Rocky scenario”.? Rocky? Balboa pursued his dream of boxing by night.? His day job was to collect money for a local loan shark mobster.

    Further, my understanding is that Caleb’s intention is to develop a character arc? from relative innocence to morally corrupt, more akin to that of Michael Corleone in the “Godfather” saga, or
    Walter White in the “Breaking Bad” series. or Malik El Djebina in “A Prophet”.

    I am 10,000 miles removed from the setting of Caleb’s? story premise. What would pique my interest is a story that? takes me inside a criminal underworld far removed and far different from the ones routinely dramatized in the US of A.? From my distant vantage point that is the story hook.

    fwiw

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  2. Posted: November 18, 2018In: Crime

    Working for the dole at a front for a criminal syndicate, a young man with dreams to box in the Sydney Olympics has an altercation with a client at work — capturing the eyes of the Owner who offers him a more profitable career… Clashing with his values and dreams.

    Caleb Tumanako Logliner
    Added an answer on November 19, 2018 at 8:06 am

    After a mild-mannered, capable young man resolves a conflict at his Work for the Dole job, he is offered a job by it's owner to provide for his disabled brother by being a henchman.    

    After a mild-mannered, capable young man resolves a conflict at his Work for the Dole job, he is offered a job by it’s owner to provide for his disabled brother by being a henchman.

     

     

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  3. Posted: November 1, 2018In: Crime

    To stop the bloody war between the two Five Points gangs, gangleader Paul Kelly must defeat his rival Monk Eastman in a boxing match, with the winner?s gang taking the disputed territory.

    CraigDGriffiths Uberwriter
    Added an answer on November 2, 2018 at 12:23 pm

    Give us the era then the main conflict. In 1800 (whenever) the heads of the two gangs running New York agree to a winner takes all boxing match to end a bloody war.

    Give us the era then the main conflict.

    In 1800 (whenever) the heads of the two gangs running New York agree to a winner takes all boxing match to end a bloody war.

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