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With dreams to box at the 2000 Sydney Olympics and provide for his family, a young man is offered a more profitable career by a charismatic crime figure clashing with his values, beliefs and kind-hearted nature.
Richiev's version is a version of the "Rocky scenario".? Rocky? Balboa pursued his dream of boxing by night.? His day job was to collect money for a local loan shark mobster. Further, my understanding is that Caleb's intention is to develop a character arc? from relative innocence to morally corruptRead more
Richiev’s version is a version of the “Rocky scenario”.? Rocky? Balboa pursued his dream of boxing by night.? His day job was to collect money for a local loan shark mobster.
Further, my understanding is that Caleb’s intention is to develop a character arc? from relative innocence to morally corrupt, more akin to that of Michael Corleone in the “Godfather” saga, or
Walter White in the “Breaking Bad” series. or Malik El Djebina in “A Prophet”.
I am 10,000 miles removed from the setting of Caleb’s? story premise. What would pique my interest is a story that? takes me inside a criminal underworld far removed and far different from the ones routinely dramatized in the US of A.? From my distant vantage point that is the story hook.
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After a mild-mannered, capable young man resolves a conflict at his Work for the Dole job, he is offered a job by it's owner to provide for his disabled brother by being a henchman.
After a mild-mannered, capable young man resolves a conflict at his Work for the Dole job, he is offered a job by it’s owner to provide for his disabled brother by being a henchman.
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Give us the era then the main conflict. In 1800 (whenever) the heads of the two gangs running New York agree to a winner takes all boxing match to end a bloody war.
Give us the era then the main conflict.
In 1800 (whenever) the heads of the two gangs running New York agree to a winner takes all boxing match to end a bloody war.
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