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  1. Posted: October 30, 2018In: Crime

    An accomplished Nigerian scam artist, beset by his conscience after his latest victim commits suicide, decides to quit the game but there is one last score.

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    Richiev Singularity
    Added an answer on October 30, 2018 at 7:44 am

    I know this is completely different, but your logline got me thinking.-------------------------------"After his latest victim commits suicide, a Nigerian scam artist goes straight and starts his own legitimate business, only to find the government officials and unions he must deal with are more corrRead more

    I know this is completely different, but your logline got me thinking.
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    “After his latest victim commits suicide, a Nigerian scam artist goes straight and starts his own legitimate business, only to find the government officials and unions he must deal with are more corrupt than he ever was.”
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    The ‘one last job’?movie has been done a lot, (Which is okay, but needs a strong hook for it to work) but what about a con-man who goes straight, only to find the seedy hoops you have to jump through to start a ‘legitimate’ business’ is more of a scam than his old life.

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  2. Posted: September 22, 2018In: Crime

    A simple disagreement in a gas station results in a store manager being brutally murdered. A dubious employee can’t accept the official explanation and asks one too many questions, sparking a series of events that could ruin him completely.

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    Neer Shelter Singularity
    Added an answer on September 23, 2018 at 11:25 am

    Love your user name by the way... This is too long and lacks detail. Why is the employee so adamant to find the killer? Is the employee a family member? What makes the murder personal for him? What's the end game for the employee? What MUST he achieve, or die trying, by the end of the story?

    Love your user name by the way…

    This is too long and lacks detail. Why is the employee so adamant to find the killer? Is the employee a family member? What makes the murder personal for him? What’s the end game for the employee? What MUST he achieve, or die trying, by the end of the story?

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  3. Posted: April 26, 2017In: Crime

    A police detective accused of murder must find his biological mother who gave him and his twin brother up for adoption at birth, to find his twin brother, the real murderer, to clear his name.

    RayD1942 Penpusher
    Added an answer on September 17, 2018 at 10:50 pm

    I've reviewed the logline and boiled it down to 10 words:?Twins separated at birth are reunited as cop and criminal. I searched IMDB and didn't find any movie close to that. If anyone knows of a movie that matches my logline please let me know the title.

    I’ve reviewed the logline and boiled it down to 10 words:?Twins separated at birth are reunited as cop and criminal.
    I searched IMDB and didn’t find any movie close to that. If anyone knows of a movie that matches my logline please let me know the title.

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